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[Flash Fiction] Just Because I Do

Sep 03, 2010 08:35

Title: Just Because I Do [Flash Fiction ( Read more... )

rating:pg, fandom:shinee, flash_fiction

Comments 41

Spot bree_nd September 3 2010, 01:25:16 UTC

For my lovely JooJoo bb~ dubujoo
I've just realised I spotted three Onew biases in a row.

Re: Spot dubujoo September 3 2010, 04:40:49 UTC

SABBY UNNIE♥ :DD *squishes you* Very thank you for the wonderful spot! Guess there are way too many Onew biases in this world x) No one can help but to fall for our sexy adorable beautiful Jinki♥

Omo, the beginning made me clench at like shirt like crazy! I was like NUUH DON'T TELL ME JINKI IS GOING TO DIE? D: Then, I scrolled back up to read the genre and I saw fluff... then I scrolled back then thinking is Jinki's death going to fluffy? ;A; I must be going a little crazt lately *pouts* I could only imagine the feelings Kibum felt when he saw Jinki get hit by the car :( I would die if I saw him die in front of my eyes...

Thank goodness it was all just a dream! The ending was sweet♥ I love how Jinki comforted Kibum and held him in his arms... That was so *squeals* ADORABLE! And Key's unconscious babbling confession was just epic xD *super glues Onkey together*

Thanks for sharing unnie! This was amazing :)
I love you, why?, just because I do.♥

Re: Spot bree_nd September 4 2010, 17:55:23 UTC

JooJoo bb~ /is squished. *squishes back* You're very welcome.
I agree! Even though he's not my bias, he still has a special place in my heart. :)

I'm sorry but the whole paragraph made me grin. Awww, bb~ You're not crazy. *kisses your pout away*
I know the feeling. You have no idea how I felt when I had the dream. It felt so real that I scared myself!

I know, right? I squealed too but pretend I didn't say that. I love that too! :) Sadly, I like Kibum as the unsure, vunerable one. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! EPIC COMMENT IS EPIC!!!
AWWW, QUOTES!!! Thank you so so so much!!! I love you too!

Spot bree_nd September 3 2010, 01:32:57 UTC

For my twin (in name) Ina lily_ina

Spot bree_nd September 3 2010, 01:38:58 UTC

For darling Bellie boogie14 who will be the fifth Onew bias I've spotted in a row. XD

Re: Spot boogie14 September 3 2010, 02:56:51 UTC

omo!!! Sabby unnie! ;u;
i didn't even thought you'd leave me a spoot!! *huugs*
brb i have to read it now! >u<)b

Re: Spot bree_nd September 4 2010, 16:10:40 UTC

Omg! You're first! XD
Were you creeping around?
You're such a ninja!

Re: Spot boogie14 September 5 2010, 01:49:32 UTC

lol, well you see i had nothing to do, or more like
i was avoiding my homework and i was wondering around lj when suddenly you posted this and i was like : "OMG! MUST READ! >U<)/"

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Spot bree_nd September 3 2010, 01:43:56 UTC

For dear Tia choon_hee even though OnKey is second on her list. :)

Re: Spot choon_hee September 4 2010, 14:50:40 UTC

I GOT A SPOOOT??? O.O
YEAAAAAY. *dance happily*

you know at first I think..
is this a supernatural fic?? o.o
and I scroll the page up again, read the genres twice >.<

and when I read the crash part >.<
I put my hand on the screen it's like I watch it for live >.<
and it's scaring me..
but this is my fav part :D LOL
I could hear the crunch of bones cracking as the car pummelled into the man from the back. ‘No, it can’t be! Not him, please; I can’t live without you,’ my heart whispered as I looked on at the unmoving body on the ground.
as long as I like Key being hurt or cry, I can't face it when Jinki die >.<

hoaa
so it just a dream right?? >.<
omoo you already make me think something bad like funeral, jinki die and kibum commit suicide .. -.-
but overall I likeeeeeeeee thiiiiiis xDDD
omooo jinki being a niceee, I like to imagine how jinki pulled kibum into his lap and cudlling with him!!
sooo cutee, and with kibum crying make it moree cutee =333

thank you for writing this xDD
especially when I need an onkey fic or moment xD

Re: Spot bree_nd September 4 2010, 18:07:50 UTC

Oh, sorry to disappoint you if you wanted to read a supernatural fic. But you and ethanlovesoreos mentioned it and well, I'm curious to see if I could challenge myself with it. So do look out for it! :)
If I do finish it, I'll be sure to spot you and him for giving me the idea of a supernatural fic. :)

I know, I scared me too. And you do realise that it actually happened to me cause I dreamt it, right? I didn't actually dream OnKey though. XD
You and your love for Kibum's tears. XD

I'm really glad you like this! :) Thank you! I love writing cuddles; they're so warm and comfortable.
And you and Kibum's tears again. XD

It's my pleasure! Thanks for reading! :)
And I'm happy I assisted in your need for an OnKey fic! :)

Anyone I've missed? bree_nd September 3 2010, 01:45:35 UTC

Sorry if I have. Do request if you want one! :)