Comments | bree_rex: Return to Me: Chapter 06--"Try Not to Remember" (Part 01 of 02)

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Return to Me: Chapter 06--"Try Not to Remember" (Part 01 of 02)

Jan 27, 2007 10:35

Title: Return to Me
Chapter: 06-Try Not to Remember (Part 01 of 02)
Rating: PG-13 for adult language and situations, mild sexual content
Author’s Notes: Chapter’s title is taken from the title of Sheryl Crow’s song of the same name ( Read more... )

Comments 5

zimbalist January 27 2007, 15:59:58 UTC

ahh, i love that last part so much. bree dancing is so great!!

breespearls January 30 2007, 01:33:17 UTC

Thanks! I think a dancing Bree is fantastic. *sigh* I like to insert little scenes like that in the fic to remind everyone that Bree probably wasn't always so cold or a Martha Stewart wannabe. I think I like this chapter more for the Bree/Danielle interaction rather than the Bree/Rex. It's so adorable. :)

phineas_gatsby January 28 2007, 14:22:27 UTC

Yay!

I'm going to pull a chargrey (hahha) and tell you my favorite lines instead of trying to write a cohesive review because I'm not very good at the CR (maybe I'll give one later...haha)

the delicate way with which she brushed the tips of her fingers over his name on one of the plaques she remembered having hung herself. Aww! Such a sweet detail.

post-victory machismo hormonesShe saw their connection in their children who resembled both their parents. I just like this because I'm so proud of casting for having found kids who look SO much like their tv parents.

Danielle knew that she was probably the only person in the world, save her mother and Andrew, that could smell ‘clean’. I love the smell of clean!

Even Danielle was acutely aware that the last Sunday of the month was reserved especially for deep-cleaning.

you never deep-clean on a Friday.” Very cute. I definitely believe it.

“God, Mom, stop being so old! You’re being like Grandma Mason ( ... )

phineas_gatsby January 28 2007, 15:24:21 UTC

Not that Chargrey's not cohesive! She's much better than I am at that...I do love how she quotes her favorite parts. But I did the quoting without the review at the end. Wow, I inadvertantly sound like a b**** early in the morning...sorry!

breespearls January 30 2007, 01:35:09 UTC

Thanks for listing your favorite lines! I like many of those, too, especially the sappy ones. *sniff*