FIC: Before The Dawn - CB slash

Jan 17, 2008 21:29

Title: Before The Dawn
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sackofsha January 18 2008, 10:52:00 UTC
Oh God, this was sublime.

Kiro's character in this fic had a very real quality to it, all the thoughts that goes through his mind and his uncertainty and the reassurance that he seeks.. it made me like Kiro even more!!

The note bit made me smile so widely. You have officially charted the dead zone in my which is my 'sentimental' side. You also treated Shin's character well, with enough depth for me to really feel for Kiro. Who knew Shin could be like that, huh? [:

I have to say that it was definitely worth it for my to keep my CB-fic virginity intact for you, hahaha. You definitely have the skill to produce tasteful fiction, with genuine human feelings, not just sex-filled, animal-esque, thoughtless slash. Well done!

Anyway, thanks again for the fic! Have a great work week ahead. We'll talk again when you come back. Take care<3!

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breezingly January 25 2008, 22:33:15 UTC
You know what? I couldn't care less if everybody else thought this was just awful as long as you liked it, cause honestly I wrote this for you! <33 ^__ ( ... )

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breezingly January 25 2008, 22:06:52 UTC
Thanks so much, dear! ^__^

I'm glad you perceive the fic the way you just described cause that's exactly what I had in mind while writing it ^_^ The whole 'it's there but we don't talk about it' at the same time as intense feelings that just can't be held back.

You wrote a fic about the second photo as well? ^______^ Link, please! Must read!! ^___^

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namida_desu January 19 2008, 14:05:42 UTC
OMG, this was sooooo beautiful!!
You made me nearly cry! Q___Q
I love it!

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breezingly January 25 2008, 21:58:02 UTC
Oh Babe! *huggles you* Don't cry! *pets you*

But I'm glad you like it ^___^

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namehereplz January 21 2008, 00:35:45 UTC
This is the the first CB fic I've ever read and it was beautiful.

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breezingly January 25 2008, 21:49:29 UTC
Aww, I was your first ^_^ *is proud*

I'm glad you liked it, dear! Hopefully there'll be more in the future! ^__^ *hugs you*

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Hey anime_asuka February 6 2008, 20:27:17 UTC
Howdy!
Hihi..that's a cool story..i saw that pic of Shin ;) and i understand why kiro felt that way bout it XD
Anyways..that's a good one..u should write more..i think im gonna try that as well!*super big smile*
Lol..Kisses**

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Re: Hey breezingly February 6 2008, 20:58:47 UTC
Glad to hear that you liked it! ^__^

And no worries, the next one is already in the making! I'm a bit caught up in work at the moment, but it should be done pretty soon, I'd say ^___^ I definitely think you should try your hand at it as well; we need all the slash we can get! <33 ^___^

*hugs*

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