Six Feet Under The Stars

[bremoisaho]

"Come on, let’s go outside.”

“Why?”

“Cause, just come on.” Bastian grabs Lukas’s hand and leads him through the crowd of people dancing and out behind the club. He leans against the cold red brick and jolts Lukas so he’s flushed against his chest and the only thing keeping their souls from intertwining is the soft fabric of new clothes.

Lukas

Comments

[sophiamoon]

Such a darling little ficlet. A pleasure to see this ship again. :-)

(not seeing much wrong with it, just one "it" that should be "it's. And personally I consider the "making love" instead of "fucking" thing very slippery ground for a writer, but again, that's purely personal, and it doesn't make the story any less enjoyable.)

[dancer_shoes]

This is so lovely, I don't know what you're worrying about!
it made me aww and feel all squishy :D

[nandolove28]

This was very sweet.

It's hard when you love someone so much and you have to be apart from them for awhile. However the fact that he allows him to see him in such vulnerability is endearing.