Comments | bremoisaho: Head in the Pillows

bremoisaho

Head in the Pillows

Jul 19, 2011 22:43

Title: Head in the pillows
Rating: Pg-13
Pairing: Iker Casillas/ David Beckham
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: “Your kids make me feel old.” Iker laughs as he climbs over David, who’s lying back with his head in the pillows.
Authors Note: I have no idea what this is. It was supposed to be a happy pwp and it just ended up being the exact opposite of ( Read more... )

slash: football, pairing: iker/david

Comments 8

ibythetide July 20 2011, 03:07:03 UTC

you absolutely killed me with the last line! i'm all heart broken and introspective and wanting nothing for love and a future for them. wonderful story! wonderful writing!! wonderful you!!!

bremoisaho July 20 2011, 14:07:47 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! I really wanted this to be happy because there aren't many happy becksillas but I got half way through and realized it wasn't going to happen.

elisa88 July 20 2011, 04:28:38 UTC

Aww man, that last part killed me!! It was good though, while it lasted, would've preferred it to last forever but all good things must come to an end =)

bremoisaho July 20 2011, 14:08:31 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

sumrndmgrl July 20 2011, 04:59:06 UTC

~is ded from

bremoisaho July 20 2011, 14:09:02 UTC

*revives* hope I got here in time to save you! Haha.

Glad you liked it <3.

jungle_moon July 21 2011, 11:16:35 UTC

Oh nooo!! Why did you twist it like that? I was convinced this will be their happy reunion, but turns out it was for both of them at 1st but only David was left in the end. *sighs*

A very nice read, though. ;)

bremoisaho July 22 2011, 01:16:17 UTC

I tried to convince them to be fluffy and happy and they were all no you have to be angsty~. It was really extremely frustrating. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic though :)