Savarna - Chapter 10

[brethlessm]

Title: Savarna - Chapter 10
Author: BrethlessM
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters but I have taken the action figures out of the box to play with them.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Unexpected revelations, jealousy, and more creepy creepers... plus more fluff.
Pairings: J/E as promised
Summary: Jack and William must rescue Elizabeth from the

Comments

[captjackspeanut]

Hey luv!

Another fantastic chapter from you as usual. It just keeps getting better and better. I wish your Captain Teague would adopt me, he just sounds so wondeful. Ofcourse, that would make it awkward for Jack and I. :0 Honestly though, one of the best sparrabeth fics I have read...and lets just say I have read a lot! Is it possible you could repost the link for the pic though, it didn't work for me?

*hugs* and I would do that in person if I could because you are such a wonderful person and writer!!

Until the next update,
your faithful reviewer,
CaptJacsPeanut

[brethlessm]

Yeah - although come to think of it, you wouldn't really be his sister, so who's to say it wouldn't work? I'm so happy you like my story. It makes me very proud to think that people really enjoy it, and consider it one of the best. Thanks always.

Kimberlee

[awickedwench]

Slowly, Jack put his left hand on Elizabeth’s waist, bracing his right on the mast at her back, just above her head. He leaned in an inch closer, staring directly into her eyes. “What’s it to be then, love? What shall we say to appease the disquieting uncertainties that are plaguing us, ay?”

*Dies!* Great chapter! Love the imagery of their kiss. Hopefully more of that in the next chapter. Must admit, though, that I'm getting a little freaked out by what it is Becoming.

[brethlessm]

Totally sexy, huh? I like being poetic in love scenes as opposed to just being lewd. Not that there's anything wrong with one method or another, but I think it's almost more erotic, if it's done right, than anything else.

I'm glad you're getting freaked! I wanted it to be creepy, so it's nice to know it works!

Kimberlee

[brethlessm]

Thanks! I'm so excited to see you post - I'm a huge Joss Whedon fan, so I know where your screen name comes from, and of course, you've got the Serenity icon - you rock! (Isn't it great we have places to go to wave our banners proudly?) I'm enjoying this story so much, and it makes me so happy to know others are too - it makes me want to write every moment of every day!

Kimberlee

[brethlessm]

I was already into Firefly by the time I saw that particular episode, so I knew who she was, and I was really impressed by how seperate her character was from River! Some actors are just the same character over and over again, but not her! I just learned how to post stuff, so I know how you feel. Pick up a pen one day and just start writing - it'll be so much fun! I wish you well!

Kimberlee

[breathless_dawn]

Great chapter, love. Happy to see some J/E action going on ;) Can't wait for the next chapter.

[brethlessm]

Yay J/E action! I love it, and intend there to me much more!

Kimberlee

[brethlessm]

Hello, my friend!! The scene is one of the extra's - the infamous, "two peas in a pod" scene. You should check it out! Very hot!

Kimberlee

[anonymous]

Such an awesome scene. It's funny how we all knew they were 'two peas in a pod'... word for word... before we even saw the scene! Sparrabether's rock! Also, I'd LOVE to beta your fic! That's awesome! I'll find the time for it, so just send it whenever you're ready!