Savarna - Chapter 18

[brethlessm]

Title: Savarna - Chapter 18
Author: BrethlessM
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters but I have taken the action figures out of the box to play with them.
Rating: M!!!
Warnings: Um... Will
Pairings: J/E as promised
Summary: Jack and William must rescue Elizabeth from the Locker, but there are forces out there - and from Jack's past - that make

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[reneeks]

Wow. I just almost finished typing a looonngg note here and this STUPID ASS COMPUTER did something funky and erased it. Anyways, that was an AWESOME chapter! ok, what did I write the first time....It made me feel...everything. Warm and fuzzy, then sad, to scared for the fate of the people we love. The words between Jack and Elizabeth were poignant, beautifeul, PERFECT! Please update again soon! I NEED another chapter...Ignore RL for a bit! It won't go anywhere! I work 40 hours and have a four year old. My computer time is from 10 pm til 2 am! All we need to function properly is 5 hrs sleep and a bucket of coffee!! WRITE MORE!!! I love you. Your writing is brilliant! ok, sorry for all the pressure(or pestering might be a more accurate word). Hmmm...how come Elizabeth had to tell Jack she loves him, but he didn't have to say it?? Heehee, just Jack, aye? Thanks for updating today, you made my week!

[brethlessm]

Don't you hate that? Computers can suck big time! Still, we can't get by with out them anymore! I'm so thrilled that you liked this chapter. I had so much fun writing it, since I'd been away for so long. I'd been letting that love scene simmer in my brain all throughout the end of the semester! It's amazing how much we can do before we burst, isn't it? As a theatre major, I had a tech class that required 80 additional hours outside of class to work on a show, and that started the week before Thanksgiving! From then on it was the show, homework, work, finals, plus the gym, spending time with my family... plus, I'd volunteered to star in a show written by a friend of mine when his lead got sick, and then I got sick! I still did the show, but I swear, I'm not sure how I made it through that last month! I'm hoping this semester will be much better (only 4 classes instead of 5), but we'll see. I'm determined to write the third book in this series and then at least one more PotC fic before the end of summer! I'll see you again soon, and don

[reneeks]

Oh, I hope you are having fun doing the shows! Sounds like a great time, despite the hard work! Glad you are feeling better now, and I can't wait to read the future chapters/fics you post!

[brethlessm]

I adore the theatre... that, singing and writing are the best things in my life! I may end up living in a cardboard box someday, but at least I'll be entertained!