[FIC] Away From Me

[brezo1816]

Name: Away From Me
Subject: KAT-TUN
Genre: Romance/Drama
Pairing: Akame
Rating: err...PG? 15? Something like that...

Summary: Kame and Jin are beginning to realise that their feelings for each other stretch a little further than friendship. But just how deep are these feelings? What are they prepared to do about them? And can it last now that the

Comments

[songkissed]

omggggggggg, this is good!!!! you've got me hooked!!! oh, and look, you have explained shuji to akira!!! XDDDD i think this is good!!! and I also think you should write more...soon! ^^ And since you asked for constructive criticism...well, I don't think there's anything wrong with it is that some spacing might confusing people...like here:

“Hey Kame! We have a break together tomorrow, wanna go get some lunch? I hear there’s a new restaurant downtown, small and cheap but the food is supposed to be great!” He asked enthusiastically but Kame was hesitant.

“I don’t know…” Jin pouted and tried to look as cute as his could.

You might want to move the 'Jin pouted and...' part to the next line so people don't think that it's Jin saying that "I don't know" (it IS Kame saying it right??)...^^;; and haha, you don't have to listen, but that's the only thing I thought might need fixing I could be wrong ; in fact, I probably am

But i definitely wanna read more!!!! ^^ *puppy eyes* pleaseeee?

♥ ♥ ♥

[honeybunz79]

Hi! Thanks for this. I LOVE the plot. Please update soon.

[carey_chan]

omg that one caught my attention and it`s ..arg~ Kitagaa~~ >___< please continue writing ,ne?^^y

[kawaiikame]

omg am so lovvveee ittttt >_

[ylhen12]

so interesting!!^^ i like this^^