"Smile"

Oct 02, 2011 09:03

Brian thinks about Justin's smile.  No particular timeline.

260 words.  These characters are not mine.

Smile )

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yvonnereid October 2 2011, 15:47:17 UTC
This is perfect Vicki,I loved it alot :)
I love Justin's smiles too :)
Huge Hugs x

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snapegirlusa October 2 2011, 16:43:56 UTC
Awww, so very sweet. I love the thought that Brian knows his Sunshine's smiles so well. This part was sad, but beautiful:
The sad smile, the one he uses when he's upset with his family and tries to pretend that he's not. The one that makes my chest hurt looking at it.

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6frog October 2 2011, 20:22:50 UTC
Darling Brian, typical that he wouldn't feel he deserves to be smiled at like that... loved like that, by someone so wonderful, but his Sunshine knows, and we know, that he deserves so much more than he's been taught to trust he deserves.

You write a really wonderful fic. Sorry about the inadequate vocab.

Love from 6frog ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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sandraj60 October 2 2011, 20:42:03 UTC
I love this. This is a nice depiction of all his smiles.

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pam81 October 3 2011, 16:19:05 UTC
So sweet and so beautiful! This was great, thanks for sharing =)

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