[Fanfic] Promises

[briaranise]

Title: Promises
Prompt: Day 13 - 'Once Upon a Dream'
Genre: romance
Pairing(s): USUK
Word Count: 1455
Rating/Warnings: G
Summary: Alfred is late to their anniversary dinner for... reasons. 
Notes: I'm attempting to write a one-shot for each day that eventually connects up into an entire story. Because it was too difficult to make it in order according to

Comments

[briaranise]

I'm glad that you enjoyed this fluff! Thank you so much for your comment. I love it when the two of them are complete dorks yet so in love with each other... I hope I did their adorkable-ness justice! XD

[j_sasunaru_c]

Hohoho! I love this chapter! It's so cute, and omg so Arthur to become scared of perfection! XD

I love the worry you've placed there, I love it when Arthur frets and worries and thinks too much negative things and then it dispels because Alfred arrives and then I also love the part where Arthur sort of rejects Alfred with his proposal and he is so crestfallen omg you remind me of the scene in You Need Me More doujin OMG SO CUTE /cries

[briaranise]

I just wanted to write fluff QuQ

I actually had no idea what to write for this chapter so I just... Yeah. Went with fluff, but Arthur isn't Arthur if he doesn't over-think things and worry constantly! Haha. I just wanted a happy ending I guess XD

Thank you for your comments, as always <3

[liete]

Ahhhh, I had meant to read this from start to finish! Sorry for the delay on that!

This was a very sweet fic. I liked the spin where Arthur was a loner because of his ability to see spirits and fairies. And his family! Trying to be supportive and yet winding up doing just the opposite in the attempt. I really felt for him.

Alfred was just darling, and I thought it was so sweet when he declared his love for Arthur in front of Arthur's mother with such conviction. :)

Ahhh and their relationship was lovely in general. Shamelessly a fan of Alfred calling Arthur "sweetheart" hee. And this ending was the right amount of sweet and dorky. Eternal boyfriends! :D

Thanks for the read, I enjoyed it! :)

[briaranise]

Gosh, thank you so much for all of your kind comments! I'm really happy that you enjoyed reading this fic of mine. You're one of my favourite authors in the USUK fandom so to have you comment on this really means a lot, and I feel really honoured :)

His family... I really love him being the baby of the family XD I guess even though parents can try their best, they don't always know what's best for the child in question.

I'm so glad that their relationship didn't come across as too sappy or overdone to you :) I'm a huge fan of 'sweetheart' too, so I spazz over it every time it comes up in your Delinquent AU.

Once again, thank you so much! Your comments make me really happy and I feel more confident about my writing now!