VENI - PROLOGUE

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

Title: Veni
Author: a_m_a_t_u_s
Rating (this chapter): PG, just to be safe.
Summary: Contention. Dan remembers nothing. Ben remembers everything. Written in Dan's POV.
Warnings: Possible spoilers to the movie, but not in this chapter. Also, eventual slash between Ben and Dan. But that's nothing warn-worthy for you guys, right?
Words: 597. I'm disgusted with

Comments

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

omg, you read this.

guh, i frickin' love your writing! i'm still in 'resurrection', but i'm working my way. >__>

that compliment made me smile. :'D

thank youuuu!

[blaidd_drwg]

Intruiging beginning. :)

h/c plus amnesia and future Ben/Dan (I hope) are three things I love to read fic about.

Baggyeyes discribed the writing style as fragmented. I think that perfectly describes it *and* fits so well with Dan in his weak, barely back to conciousness state.

3 favorite bits:
My head hurts and I want to go back to sleep. I want to be Sleeping Beauty. I want to stay in a glass coffin in the middle of the forest and never wake up again. - the imagery is wonderful

Son's eyes water, and they're a pretty little shade of blue, and I wonder if those are my eyes, because I don't know what Me looks like.

I let him crush me because I think that's the right thing to do. I don't know who he is, but this is probably the right thing to do.

"Pa, oh, pa, I'm so glad you're okay..."

I tune out, and go back to sleep.

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

Intriguing is good, right? I hope the whole thing'll be intriguing, because I have no idea where it's gonna go... just little fragments here and there. :)

Of course there'll be Wadevans, otherwise I wouldn't be posting here. xP

The fragmented thing is something I want to try out, along with first person point of view. It's hard to get into an amnesiac-weakling's head. xD

Thank you for your comment! It made me all mushy inside ♥

[keepmeturning51]

I love this so far!!!

[a_m_a_t_u_s]

r u srs?

But thank you! That means a lot. c: