Goal Needed to be Fulfilled

[bridgemus]

Hey, I've seen this thing going around about a thousand times, and I wanted to try it out myself... see if anyone ever reads this crap... soooo... I want to get 69 comments on this entry. (that's a number, not a subject ;-) Write anything you want. Write as many comments as you want... Fill my inbox!! Do eeeeet!

Ready... Settttttttt.... Spam me!

Comments

[lenatheraven]

You, my lovely, will never escape
the longing I have for you.
I breathe down the nape
of your neck, wishing
you would see my heart agape
and run to fill the its hollows
with love to mend then reshape
that which has become

a broken vessel. Too soon,
you turn around to see
that you can make me swoon
with even as little as your scent.
You stop my heart's tune
with a look of disgust and rejection
and leave me under the cruel moon
to a death of living alone.

[bridgemus]

Oh my gods, that's beautiful. Who's it for?

[lenatheraven]

not really sure, this stuff falls out of my head like it is just another unlabeled tear-drop.

Sorry, still in a poetic state of mind. I guess I still miss Sarah like there's no tomorrow to find a better sunrise.

[bridgemus]

Well, regardless, I like it... and with revision, it could be considered for publishing

[lenatheraven]

I wrote that.

[lenatheraven]

Please do not plagarize.

[lenatheraven]

If it sucks it is because I did it in less than 5 minutes and I did it for no other purpose than to poat a comment that was pretty.

[lenatheraven]

*post

[bridgemus]

Why do you SUCK at spelling?! GOSH!

[lenatheraven]

Cause I feel like it! GOSH!!

[lenatheraven]

I like it...but if you don't I am sorry, and I hope you don't consider it spam. Eew. No spam thanks. I don't generally eat mammals. I will help you reach your goal, I am a comment whore.

[bridgemus]

Nope, no spam. It's a lovely poem. I like it.

[bridgemus]

"comment" whore. com'on. loose the title. you're just a regular whore, aren't you