Sibling Aggravation and Fantastic Fantasies via Disneyland - A Jeff/Annie Community Fanfic Part 1

[briefan1972]

Title: Sibling Aggravation and Fantastic Fantasies via Disneyland - A Jeff/Annie Community Fanfic    Part 1
Author: briefan1972
Summary: A trip to Disneyland with four children can be trying for a couple and sometimes old secrets come out.....
Spoilers: 5x04 Cooperative Polygraphy
Rating/Warnings: R (Profanity, upcoming smut)
Word Count: 5,142

Comments

[tattelatte]

This is super cute. I really liked Jeff's Winger Speech that's now for his kids instead of the study group. :]

[briefan1972]

Thanks! I didn't actually start off trying to write a 'Winger Speech'.... It just sorta happened organically. I didn't initially know exactly where or how far I wanted to go with the kids (in terms of dialogue and interaction), so as I got farther into writing it, the children started to develop more and soon I was left with what you have read.

As far as 'Winger Speeches' go, I don't think it's fantastic, but I hope it's kinda funny and I can certainly see Jeff saying this in his typical pattern.

[claymay83]

damn, i never thought a trip to Disney could be so suggestive and dirty. Great job. Can't wait to see what happens next.

[briefan1972]

Well, I hope to have the next chapter up soon and I don't see it being much more than an extended smut sequence..... Maybe that's not all bad!

[briefan1972]

Thank you so much for reading and for the compliment. I tried to make them feel as natural as I could as a couple many years into their relationship. Hopefully I succeeded. And same for making them seem like parents and a family.....

I appreciate the comments. Hope you can check out my other fics as well.