Butterfly Seasons Chapter Ten - From Good to Bad

[dancinggoldfish]

I'm sorry this is a couple of days late. I got laid low with a particularly nasty cold, and have basically spent the last couple of days in bed. I was too tired to even put the sheets on my bed after I did laundry - so I've just been sleeping on a mattress the last two nights. But I am now feeling 50% human so I'm posting this. Please leave

Comments

[msninacat]

Just stumbled across this. I'm really enjoying your development of the relationship between James and Lily. It's much more realistic than most of the explanations I've read. And I love Frank in this! Are you planning on including how he and Alice got together? Just curious. Can't wait for more!

[pokie4389]

Yay! Loved it! that was a quick deterioration of James and Lily's friendship. Sadness, hopefully they work it out soon enough! I love Frank in this story, he's so awesome.

[hayleyjayne1]

i really like this story, it seams to flow a lot better than others i have read and you have avoided the extremes of lily either being super sweet or a total tramp, cant wait for the next update.

[anonymous]

I loved this story and am eagerly awaiting the next installment. It's a well written story with a refreshing spin on the Lily/James relationship. I do have one little criticism about a sentence in chapter 5 - it's the last sentence of the first section. Oh! I wanted to mention that I get the feeling that Alice thought that Frank may have had a crush on Lily... Anyway, thanks for posting this in the lilyandjames community, otherwise I would never have found this lovely story. =)

-imsomaniac

updates?

[autumngumdrops]

I've been reading this, although its been a while now. So I can't give specific compliments, but I do generally remember this being really good. Anyway, I was wondering if you're still writing this? Updates would be greatly appreciated.