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Nov 02, 2005 11:22


O.C. Missing Scene Challenge S2 - "The Way We Were"

"The Rebellious Hash Smoking Princess"

Rating: PG

Pairing: Kirsten/Sandy

Disclaimer:  Josh owns it all.  'Cept I own the toga.

A/N: A Kirsten/Ryan discussion about the baby has already been done a few times, so I decided not to touch the subject. Instead, I put together a Kandy piece, who are ( Read more... )

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amplifiedstatic November 2 2005, 18:34:59 UTC
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful! You seriously captured the spirit of Kandy in this one, and I applaud you for it. It's not easy, AT ALL, to keep the dialogue flowing as perfectly as you did here. You have got the both of them DOWN TO A T. Sandy's witty remarks, Kirsten's stifled smiles, all of it can be visualised with such ease. I think Josh needs to get his ass on here and read what his show should include.

I still stand that you're horrible for depriving us from your amazing fic, but what can we do, ya lazy ass.

AMAZING piece of writing, D. Absolutely love it.

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fredsmith518 November 2 2005, 18:39:34 UTC
Enjoyed reading this fic. I really think you present the sharp side to Kirsten which melts into the Kirsten who loves Sandy very well.

I like the angst lightened with humour and the conversation returning to the damaged foot too. Altogether a natural feel.

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WOW! funkymarry November 2 2005, 19:27:43 UTC
Cutie, you are an AMAZING writer! You should really give us more to read (at least two other fics ;)). You are so talented and you sure know how to put emotions in words. Thats your gift. Just like your last challenge, this one was really good too!

I love that part, it made me laugh! LOL!: ~~ "Yeah, I know. I mean, you wanted eight coats of paint for the living room walls. What's next? Triple layered carpet in the pool house? Red dye number five for the pool water?" ~~

I really hope you'll give us something to read soon. I enjoy everything you write. Good work again :) mwah

ps 1: Nice name for a secretary ;) heh. :P

ps 2: They will sooooo have sex. Write more ;) lolll

Im proud of you! :* :*

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dogsbody01 November 2 2005, 23:41:28 UTC
A light, pleasant scene that would've really made S2 good.

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alopecia November 3 2005, 03:18:40 UTC
kandy is always sweet, finding their way back from summer tension after the boys have returned. ah, a nice read.

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