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brightsidedc

OCSFC

Jul 08, 2005 20:24

Title: Falling From Grace
Author: BrightsideDC
Written for: TatorTots370
Pairing: None
Rating: R for language
Sentence: Seth loses his toothbrush.
Author's Notes: Second one-shot/fic ever. So I'm sitting here, very insecure and scared of posting this, lol. But it's for fun, so what the hell. I know you probably wanted humor out of this Tots, but I went ( Read more... )

Comments 20

anonymous July 9 2005, 00:36:45 UTC

Nicely done dude! Its different, but in a good way. Shows a deeper side to Seth, which is great! Now get crackin on that 2nd one! lol

-- Brabbit.

dogsbody01 July 9 2005, 06:01:38 UTC

It's funny(certainly not funny as in comic) how such little things, like not being able to find Your Toothbrush; when your going through a really horrible time. Can leave You, feeling like You have absolutely no control over Your life. All I can say is: Been there, done that.

brightsidedc July 9 2005, 12:45:07 UTC

Been there, done that also. Glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

funkymarry July 9 2005, 08:13:06 UTC

Im 100% sure you'll find time to work on the second one FOR MONDAY (!?!?!?!!?!?). Really Cutie. i have faith in you! So im here to help you... like kicking your butt and telling ya to get back to work. I can even keep my mouth shut so you can write your other one. So no Smooky time for us :-\... hm and what about my bday gift (wont forget that one!!!)

ok, now my real comment about this fic.

AWESOME! But you already knew huh ;)
Keep writing. And dont be so insecure.

wuv ya! :*
S.P.

amplifiedstatic July 9 2005, 12:58:33 UTC

Brilliant? Amazing? Outstanding? All of the above! It was SUCH a touching piece and I could literally feel my heart aching. I can't believe you wrote Seth, but you wrote him perfectly. It was just PERFECT in every single way. I loved the ending especially! Beautiful, D. Beautiful! Heart it, hun. Heart it to death!

cinnamongrrl61 July 9 2005, 15:35:36 UTC

I think this is the first Seth tragic flashback I've read (compared to plenty of Chino!Ryan ones I've read and written). Very sad and important, since I hadn't thought about this part of Kirsten's life and the impact it may have had--you do get a little from the "Risky Business" moment w/the tea set. So, well done!

brightsidedc July 10 2005, 14:11:02 UTC

Glad you liked it. I felt like, if Kirsten had been that upset when Caleb passed, imagine how she felt when her mother passed away. And growing up in Newport, where alcohol is passed out like Capri Suns to little league soccer teams, she may have had a drinking problem way before Rebecca entered the picture.