I don't know who I love more: you for writing this awesome piece or ripptyd for practically forcing you to write this. Okay, I'm picking you because the writer has to get her due. I've already thrown love over ripptyd's way so you're getting all the love and praise tonight. :p
Seriously, I really enjoyed reading this. It's perfect and I love that you're writing from Crystal's point of view. I got chills during the kiss. Very nice.
Oh, it was already in progress when I let ripptyd know something was brewing and then she was like like DO IT NOW. ahahaha. I'm glad you enjoyed it, although I'm still like "YOU CROSSED THAT LINE!!!". So positive feedback is good, 'cause it makes me feel moderately less guilty.
As to the POV... I can't do it the other way. I don't know how ripptyd does it!
I'm kind of pleased with how the kiss turned out, although I have about a dozen more lines I would now use for it. Maybe for next time. If there's a next time. ;)
Then good for her being demanding, lol. I don't read fic at all but when she started writing her RPF, I became kinda addicted and now I just want more. It just sucks that there are not enough people who are willing to write about these two. I get the apprehension because at first I was like "That's just wrong" but then I got over that because in the end, it's still only fiction. It's not like it's hurting anyone, you know?
I hope there is a next time! (Pretty please?) I would love to read more from Crystal's POV. Now you're just teasing us with the "dozen more lines" comment. Cruel!
See, I've been around fic/fanfic/original fic for like, 15 years? And throughout those 15 years, it's always been (in my circles, generally) "characters are fine, TOUCH NOT THE ACTORS
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Took me a second of perusing your userinfo to figure out who you are and why you can't say anything on Twitter, but ahahaha, figured it out and totally understandable. :D
Thanks for the feedback. I'll post on twitter if there's more, of course. <3
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You HAVE to write more. Someone has to keep writing from CC's POV since I have JL's. XD
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IF I write more, like I said, you'll know. And it'll totally be from CC's POV.
I still totally hate you. ;)
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Seriously, I really enjoyed reading this. It's perfect and I love that you're writing from Crystal's point of view. I got chills during the kiss. Very nice.
Please write more.
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As to the POV... I can't do it the other way. I don't know how ripptyd does it!
I'm kind of pleased with how the kiss turned out, although I have about a dozen more lines I would now use for it. Maybe for next time. If there's a next time. ;)
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I hope there is a next time! (Pretty please?) I would love to read more from Crystal's POV. Now you're just teasing us with the "dozen more lines" comment. Cruel!
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll post on twitter if there's more, of course. <3
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