Ooooh!! What an exciting chapter! It was definitely worth the wait : )
Try not to stress out too much about working on Justice on top of your hectic work schedule. Just try to work on it whenever have some time, and let us know when you're far enough along to give us an ETA. Or would that be ETP? (Estimated Time of Posting)
Oh, and also:
“Sweetheart, you are really going to have to stop gazing limpidly at my ass.”
Oh man, Ryo and his conflicted feelings! I can't wait to see how he handles Ted, lol. I don't comment often (this maybe the first time!) but I just loved this chapter, lots of great character building. <3 - seb
Thank you for commenting! I'm enjoying Ryo's conflicted feelings, too. He's got a lot going on right now. He was a repressed personality for years, on emotional and sexual lockdown. Now he's given himself permission to acknowledge and explore his sexuality, but it's maybe a bit bigger and more intense than he thought it would be, and it's hard to keep it contained in his self-imposed closet.
That was an amazing chapter! :D I especially loved Ryo this time. You write him so well. And damn, there are many of Dee's ex-lovers around! That would piss me off too. The you-have-to-stop-gazing-at-my-ass-talk was hilarious, and so was the meeting with the Bomb Squat. Poor Ryo has an uncomfortable day today xD But thank God they went to the Bomb Squat! This Abernathy is one sick bastard o.O I can't believe this guy is still out there! Come on, guys, put him behind bars already! I'm really excited how it will happen to Maria now. She could be a great help against Abernathy, but then again, it looks like she will pay for her bravery. Wow I'm looking forward to the next chapter... What is Bikky doing, by the way? And Abernathy's son? I feel so sorry for that kid :( And for Ross, too! Poor guy. So all in all, a very exciting chapter! ^-^ I'm looking forward to the next one - whenever it will be there - and try to be patient ;) Did I mention I shrieked when I saw the update? Well I did. It's a good thing I check your LJ every day! :D
I am sick in bed at home trying to build up enough energy to go into work later this afternoon. So, reading that you shrieked when you saw my update-- LOL! That makes me feel happy. And thanks for checking my LJ every day.
Yes, poor Ryo is having an action-packed, uncomfortable day. Finding out that Ted knows his big secret, being treated with contempt by the Bomb Squad, feeling like he's up to his neck in his boyfriend's past conquests and having highly inappropriate-- by his own standards--fantasies about Lance's huge, sausage-like fingers. And he's still got several hours to go before the work day is over.
Oh now, why is everyone sick at the moment? :o Get well soon! Of course I check your LJ every day ;) Livejournal is strange and tends to forget about informing me when there's a new post...
Haha, I wonder if Dee will ever find out about Ryo's finger-fetish xD
Yeah, it does seem as though everyone is sick at the moment. First my sister, then my assistant, then my father, now me. Normally my immune system can fight these things off, but it has been weakened by the general dearth of days off from work in my life recently.
LJ doesn't inform me about lots of things either, even though my settings clearly state that I want it to. I wonder if they'll ever fix that? But, really, thank you for checking! I'm going to post random stuff more often just for you.
Ryo's finger fetish is kind of new to Ryo, too. Oh the things he imagines those fingers doing to him! Dee will figure it out eventually. What a one-shot that would make. But Ryo will probably never tell him. Wait until Dee catches Ryo looking at Lance all blushingly in an unguarded moment! (Look out, Lance)
Poor Ryo, what a bad day! Well it could have been a lot worse, as Roddy and the bomb squad are about to find out. Hope that humbles them into being a little more courteous to Ryo in the future. Personal pettiness should never get in the way of doing their jobs and keeping the men safe. At least Roddy and Dee seemed interested in doing their jobs right.
As for his bad mood, though, he really has no one to blame but himself. Worrying about your current's exes is never good and always pointless, and ill-timed considering it comes on the same day you fuss and whine at Dee over the Ted thing. Too much pointing fingers, Ryo. Dee was a lot more gracious than he had to be, considering a lot of it was your fault.
'Maria', whoever you are, better wise up and get yourself out now. You are obviously a lynchpin in Abernathy's machine. Walk and it falls apart. Or maybe Bo will do it for you with the FBI. Wouldn't that just make Diana's day?
I knew Ryo would annoy you in this chapter! He's blaming Dee for his own indiscreet behavior that caused Ted to notice their relationship. Now he's getting pissed about Dee's ex-lovers and flirtatious nature while at the same time having fantasies about another man's large fingers. But Dee loves him anyway, despite Ryo's instinctive habit of blaming him for everything.
Maria is soon going to have a very bad day of her own.
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Try not to stress out too much about working on Justice on top of your hectic work schedule. Just try to work on it whenever have some time, and let us know when you're far enough along to give us an ETA. Or would that be ETP? (Estimated Time of Posting)
Oh, and also:
“Sweetheart, you are really going to have to stop gazing limpidly at my ass.”
GAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! XD Loved it!
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Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you loved the chapter. This one gave me so much trouble. What a relief it was to finally get it sorted out and posted.
I'll keep up with the 'ETP's'. I used to disappear for weeks or even months at a time in between posts, but now I have mended my ways.
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I especially loved Ryo this time. You write him so well. And damn, there are many of Dee's ex-lovers around! That would piss me off too.
The you-have-to-stop-gazing-at-my-ass-talk was hilarious, and so was the meeting with the Bomb Squat. Poor Ryo has an uncomfortable day today xD
But thank God they went to the Bomb Squat! This Abernathy is one sick bastard o.O I can't believe this guy is still out there! Come on, guys, put him behind bars already!
I'm really excited how it will happen to Maria now. She could be a great help against Abernathy, but then again, it looks like she will pay for her bravery. Wow I'm looking forward to the next chapter...
What is Bikky doing, by the way? And Abernathy's son? I feel so sorry for that kid :( And for Ross, too! Poor guy.
So all in all, a very exciting chapter! ^-^ I'm looking forward to the next one - whenever it will be there - and try to be patient ;)
Did I mention I shrieked when I saw the update? Well I did. It's a good thing I check your LJ every day! :D
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I am sick in bed at home trying to build up enough energy to go into work later this afternoon. So, reading that you shrieked when you saw my update-- LOL! That makes me feel happy. And thanks for checking my LJ every day.
Yes, poor Ryo is having an action-packed, uncomfortable day. Finding out that Ted knows his big secret, being treated with contempt by the Bomb Squad, feeling like he's up to his neck in his boyfriend's past conquests and having highly inappropriate-- by his own standards--fantasies about Lance's huge, sausage-like fingers. And he's still got several hours to go before the work day is over.
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Get well soon!
Of course I check your LJ every day ;) Livejournal is strange and tends to forget about informing me when there's a new post...
Haha, I wonder if Dee will ever find out about Ryo's finger-fetish xD
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LJ doesn't inform me about lots of things either, even though my settings clearly state that I want it to. I wonder if they'll ever fix that? But, really, thank you for checking! I'm going to post random stuff more often just for you.
Ryo's finger fetish is kind of new to Ryo, too. Oh the things he imagines those fingers doing to him! Dee will figure it out eventually. What a one-shot that would make. But Ryo will probably never tell him. Wait until Dee catches Ryo looking at Lance all blushingly in an unguarded moment! (Look out, Lance)
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As for his bad mood, though, he really has no one to blame but himself. Worrying about your current's exes is never good and always pointless, and ill-timed considering it comes on the same day you fuss and whine at Dee over the Ted thing. Too much pointing fingers, Ryo. Dee was a lot more gracious than he had to be, considering a lot of it was your fault.
'Maria', whoever you are, better wise up and get yourself out now. You are obviously a lynchpin in Abernathy's machine. Walk and it falls apart. Or maybe Bo will do it for you with the FBI. Wouldn't that just make Diana's day?
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Maria is soon going to have a very bad day of her own.
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