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FAKE First Year Together: Justice (June) Chapter 33

Dec 08, 2013 20:23

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peacewish December 9 2013, 19:51:53 UTC

Squeal squeal squeal! So much is going on and things are accelerating so fast, I hardly know which way to look! Is it Pedrick? Aberenathy? WHERE will the next surprise spring from?

More than anything, I am lost in admration for Diana's mad interrogation skills. She played Bo like a fiddle. Bible thumper never had a chance.

brit_columbia December 10 2013, 01:37:05 UTC

Thanks, Peacewish! Yes, there's a lot happening at this point in the story, and more to come. The scales have finally tipped in favor of the team at the 27th and Abernathy will have to scramble.

jenmoon1 December 16 2013, 07:28:16 UTC

Love it thanks for the update will a lemon be next chapter

brit_columbia December 30 2013, 01:20:04 UTC

Sorry-- I forgot I didn't reply to your comment. In answer to your question, no, I don't think there will be a lemon for a while. There's a bunch of action coming and Dee and Ryo won't be alone behind a closed door for some time.

awieatti December 29 2013, 22:30:23 UTC

Hey Brit! Sorry for disappearing for so long. This chapter is awesome, I don't know why I didn't leave a comment the first time I read it ;_; But here I am again!

I love Diana this time. She knows exactly what she's doing! :D Poor Bo, I almost feel sorry for him!

Oh, and that Pedrick-guy is totally acting suspicious! I hope Bikky will find out more about that because I'm wondering what he's up to...

Aww, no relaxation time again? Too bad. Poor Dee. (And poor Ryo. It's so cute how he has to restrain himself when Dee is sitting mostly naked beside him! And Dee knows exactly what effect he is having on him, haha!)

brit_columbia December 30 2013, 01:23:40 UTC

Hello Awieatti, so glad you're back!

Berk knew he could count on Diana to catch the spy, and she did.

Yeah, Dee knows how to work it without being too obvious about it. Poor Ryo. Poor both of them! Ryo was probably secretly looking forward to being seduced-- after a nice, cooling shower, of course!

awieatti January 15 2014, 00:37:26 UTC

A cooling shower - I'd rather need a warm shower at the moment, it's so cold here! xD How are you doing, by the way? I heard about that terribly cold weather in the USA and Canada! But that's not where you live, right? (I hope not!)
Oh and how do you manage to describe hot June weather anyways, in the middle of the winter? Do you have certain rituals to get you in the mood for writing Justice? :D I personally find it easier to write winter scenes when it's cold, and summer scenes when it's hot...

ranuel January 9 2014, 00:42:07 UTC

The plot thickens! Abernathy is the type to be most vicious when cornered though so I'm waiting for him to do something really horrible soon.

brit_columbia June 6 2014, 02:31:48 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I've really got to find some time to get back to this story. At this pint I can't even remember where my WIP is.

anonymous January 16 2015, 06:31:52 UTC

Hi .. Great story... Please finish it :(

brit_columbia January 17 2015, 01:03:11 UTC

Hi, thanks for enjoying it. I know I haven't posted for a long time, but I will finish it. I had to stop writing when I realized that being self-employed meant kissing goodbye to weekends and evenings. But I don't want my life to be all about work, so I'm trying to change that, even if it means earning less money. I haven't abandoned this story.