Dragon Lady, chapter 5

[brit_columbia]

Dear Readers, Here's Dragon Lady number 05.

Comments

[kfightermiki]

What what whaaaat?? Another cliff hanger! What could be under the table?!

And two typos:

A little more than halfway through, Bikkyharried needs a space, and near the end, Ryo should say they shouldn't eat here, not should.

[brit_columbia]

Thanks, Miki! I posted this chapter in the middle of the night, which is pretty much a guarantee that I'll miss stuff. I don't know why I have a problem with negatives like wouldn't and shouldn't. I can't tell you how many times I've forgotten the negative suffix.

Anyway, it's fixed now. I hope there are no more mistakes or typos.

[anonymous]

Wow. Things took a turn didn't it? And I wonder what's under that table, although I would not be surprised if it's a tiger cub. (I kid you!)

Thank you and looking forward to the next chapter!

[brit_columbia]

Nope, it's not a tiger cub, although that's a good guess. Thanks so much for reading!

[awieatti]

Woah! What kind of restaurant is that? I wouldn't want to eat there either! xD

Now I want to know what's under that table! Is it a pig? A sheep? But that wouldn't startle Bikky so much, right? I don't know xD

(And by the way, I found a little typo:
James! Oh my god! There’s-there’s an animal under her clothes!”
You forgot the first quotation marks there ^^ )

[brit_columbia]

You will never guess what's under the table. I guarantee a surprise!

Thanks for catching the typo. I don't know how many times I read over this chapter without noticing that.

I think I would want to eat at this restaurant just for the entertainment factor.

[awieatti]

Ooh I'm excited now! What may it be, what may it be... A chinese dragon?! I don't know xD

[brit_columbia]

Thanks for reminding me. I've got to get back to work on Chapter 6,

[anonymous]

I love this ficlet! ^~^

Sorry this isn't a long comment...I'm a bit pressed for time with work.

*closes by stealthily drawing your attention back to Fighting Stance before running away*

[brit_columbia]

Thanks for commenting! And for drawing my attention back to F.S. I'll see what I can do about updating that one in the near future.

..rats...

[anonymous]

I love the chapter!

I have the feeling the animal is a rat...I thought it was somebody's 'manly part' at first, but as far as I know, those shouldn't make snuffling noises...

...sooo, rat? Yes? No?

Re: ..rats...

[brit_columbia]

No, this is a big animal. It' bumped against Carol's and Ryo's knees. Not a rat! But thanks for guessing...