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caliena June 4 2011, 23:11:26 UTC
This starts off very well, I like it :)

(And I don't know if it helps, for I am not a native speaker, but I couldn't see any great mistakes ;))

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myownghost June 4 2011, 23:58:17 UTC
i like this already. kurt is so reasonable, and dave is so willing to work on the car! (santana would talk back to jersey shore. *g*)

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brittanyksduh June 5 2011, 00:06:34 UTC
Thank you! Hopefully I can get the next chapter up soon. =)

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captain_love June 5 2011, 00:03:28 UTC
Great beginning ! Thanks for giving us a look about their summer activities, so many questions won't be answered in the show. It's nice to learn Dave is clever with his hands...

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mizsharmae June 5 2011, 00:24:09 UTC
I really like this beginning, and I'm stoked to see that you're writing stuff for this pairing!

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lizzypoodle June 5 2011, 00:44:17 UTC
I don't know why, exactly, but the idea of Dave making soup and walking toward a house carrying said soup in a tinfoil covered bowl makes me rather melty inside. I look forward to more. This was a great start!

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