Great beginning ! Thanks for giving us a look about their summer activities, so many questions won't be answered in the show. It's nice to learn Dave is clever with his hands...
I don't know why, exactly, but the idea of Dave making soup and walking toward a house carrying said soup in a tinfoil covered bowl makes me rather melty inside. I look forward to more. This was a great start!
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(And I don't know if it helps, for I am not a native speaker, but I couldn't see any great mistakes ;))
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