Comments | brixxx: Fic: Just for Now

brixxx

Fic: Just for Now

Dec 03, 2007 23:05

Title: Just for Now
Pairing: Snarry
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst
Word count: 1,671
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and the subsequent rights attatched to the books/films are the property of J.K.Rowling, Scholastic, and WB etc; I only created the plot in this story.
Beta: Beta-ed by captainlogic so any mistakes remaining are mine.
Summary: Snape tries to convince ( Read more... )

snarry

Comments 4

captainlogic December 3 2007, 23:52:24 UTC

I hate you in such a delicious way. I SOOOO want you to fix this, but then it wouldnt be true to the characters and wouldnt be so delightfully gut wrenching. You evil genius bitch. Oh i so conflicted!

brixxx December 10 2007, 00:43:51 UTC

*preens* I made you squirm I made you squirm! *coughs* sorry?

cribbins December 9 2007, 13:33:40 UTC

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I usually don't go out of my way to read Snarry, but of course I had to read this because your writing makes me WRITHE ABOUT IN PUREST GLEE.

As well you know.

Seriously, your sentence structure, your imagery, the spaces, the dream-like quality to the whole thing that speaks PERFECTLY about Snape's sense of detachment, it's all pitch perfect and absolutely beautiful.

"and I find that I can tolerate these" - You HAD me at this line. I was actually squeaking at the fantasticness of that whole sentence.

"his startling green eyes meet mine again. They plead with me for a moment, either to forgive him or for something else," - We must have been writing these fics at the same time, right? WE ARE AS ONE BRAIN D:

"He pushes his hands into the pockets of his jeans, creating identical bulges." - HOW MANY IDENTICAL BULGES? :DDDD

I love this, and you, and all things you write, god dammit.

(ps. using my icon of MASSIVE GAYISTS just for you)

brixxx December 10 2007, 00:47:35 UTC

Your comment has put the BIGGEST SMILE ON MY FACE. Seriously, it's getting creepy now. It won't go away.

It's true - there is no longer a difference between our brains. This has intriguing evil genius ramifications you realise? Yes?

I love your icon, almost as much as I like the image of them getting all happy on a roof before falling into a bouncy castle. I'm glad that sentence made sense to you.

Bouncy bouncy..ahving such a good time...boucny bouncy...shoes all in a line...

By the way, recognise my icon? :)