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oxoniensis August 31 2009, 22:47:21 UTC
I love the way they dance on the edge of it all, close but not quite admitting it, and then Brad just goes for it. And then the ending, Nate nuzzling into Brad's neck, their quiet words - lovely.

And this, Nate's bit of flirting back: “You’re quite right, Sergeant. It impedes my combat effectiveness.” Hee!

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aboutademongirl September 1 2009, 06:32:53 UTC
Brad's not the type to dance on the edge for too long. Far too tiring, that. Why not just take a shot? <3.

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romanticalgirl September 1 2009, 07:18:31 UTC
The thought of Brad's ass impeding combat effectiveness is the best compliment Nate could have paid. Heee.

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aboutademongirl September 1 2009, 07:20:19 UTC
You can be assured that Brad fully acknowledges this fact.

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spooky_window September 13 2009, 09:34:48 UTC
oh that was so good ^^

"Impediment of combat effectiveness? "
LOL

"then nips at the tender skin behind it, once, twice, the third time sharply, and then returns to Brad’s mouth in time to capture and swallow his loud, low moan as he comes."
so hot and beautiful at the same time

"simply shakes his head and nuzzles it into Brad’s shoulder, tilting his face up and laying a soft kiss on Brad’s neck"
AWW

thanx for sharing :D

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aboutademongirl September 13 2009, 13:00:19 UTC
You're most welcome! Thanks for reading andl iking!

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spooky_window September 13 2009, 13:07:02 UTC
would that sound pathetic if i say that i've read it twice already ?
cant help it, it's like i NEED more GK stuff (especially brad/nate stuff) and the show being over, fanfic are all i have
thanx again ♥

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aboutademongirl September 13 2009, 13:14:12 UTC
It's not pathetic at all! I do the same thing with almost all GK-fics I've ever read. I don't even know why - they surprise me every time!

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amberlynne November 1 2009, 02:46:35 UTC
Ooooooooooooh. I don't know how I missed this but what a nice awesome surprise! I love that Nate is trying to resist Brad but Brad just breaks down all his walls. And the kissing. OH THE KISSING! ♥ Wonderful!

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aboutademongirl November 1 2009, 10:30:13 UTC
Aww, I'm glad you liked it! KISSING IS LOVELY.

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