Fic: Fade to Black Pt 7 - Rhapsody in Blue [The Mentalist]
Title: Fade to Black Pt 7 - Rhapsody in Blue
Summary: Temptation comes in many forms, all of them Patrick Jane. Post episode 2x07.
Rating: T
Characters: Jane, Van Pelt
( Every breath hurt, every step as she made her way to the door where an insistent knock broke the silence in her apartment. )
Summary: Temptation comes in many forms, all of them Patrick Jane. Post episode 2x07.
Rating: T
Characters: Jane, Van Pelt
( Every breath hurt, every step as she made her way to the door where an insistent knock broke the silence in her apartment. )
Comments 5
The tension, it is palpable. :(
*goes to look for fluff to alleviate the stress*
As always, well done, my dear.
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Jane refuses to work on my schedule. He'll say nothing to me for days, then when I'm most incapacitated (the car, usually, barreling down the interstate) he'll suddenly wax verbose. Of course then I have to stop and take notes on my BlackBerry. >:[
BACK TO YOUR FIC- I love the irony of him "making a move," as it were, the moment she's unavailable to him. Sigh, I expect nothing less from him.
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Meanwhile, if the show didn't want us to think she secretly fancied him, why does Grace always ask where Jane is or look at him all the time. Gah! Give me something! (Not saying 'I love you' back to Rigsby was a start, show, but would it kill you to give me a little more? Like hot, naked sex more?)
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