Mr. Perfect Next Door 1/?

Nov 28, 2013 02:28

Title: Mr. Perfect Next Door 1/?
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2994
Disclaimer: Don’t own anything.

Summary: Jaejoong finds the new neighbour so, so attractive, and Yunho’s really good with dogs.

♥♥♥
He looked up to see God. )

genre: romance, title: mr perfect next door, length: chaptered, pairing: yunjae, genre: fluff

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dilovesyunjae November 28 2013, 10:31:31 UTC
Yes yunho is a god! Haha.

And ohhhh whats thay which yunho has yet to tell jj?

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broken_ephemera November 28 2013, 17:14:26 UTC
HAHA the God part is really too funny XD
BUT I AGREE.

I can't do spoilers bb! -covers mouth-
Don't tempt me XD

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jaeshire_cat November 28 2013, 11:05:24 UTC
Awww~ love it so much!!!
hope it's still fluff for the next update ;p

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broken_ephemera November 28 2013, 17:14:52 UTC
AW I hope I'll be feeling fluffy enough for fluff (just for you) <3

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countingcr0ws November 28 2013, 11:13:12 UTC
A feeling that had unknowingly crept up to him and taken residence in the pits of his stomach and sometimes in the void within his rib cage, sometimes so sweet it was smouldering, the tightness in his chest something he couldn’t shut out.

of love. This was making love. Even as Yunho flipped them over when Jaejoong couldn’t continue, the strain and pleasure combined proving too much, as eyes fell shut from the onslaught of pleasure, as their lips found each other’s when they rode out the crest of their climaxes together, fireworks bursting behind their eyelids, the warm, warm feeling of love in their chests didn’t diminish, never left.

Oh these. The first was gorgeous. Wayyy gorgeous. I was breathtaken and I've reread it more than twice. :o the second was really cool. Haha. And I love your summary! Lol. Sexy neighbours have been written to death but there's always new takes to it, and I absolutely died when you panned to Yunho the first time, hahaha. Like oh, I get a shot at knowing how Yunho works too?? Wow. Super adorable, hee.

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broken_ephemera November 28 2013, 17:18:47 UTC
OMGGGGG.

THANK YOU. <3

You're PERFECT.
I was so touched that you read those parts more than twice! <3

YAY glad to know the perspectives work for you!
Sometimes when I read books I'm just DYING to know what the other person is thinking and I keep thinking that it'd be great if I could get out of the just-one-person perspective, like I HAVE IT ENOUGH IN REAL LIFE, PLEASE >:(

HAHA just.
SOMETIMES.

So.
I'M HAPPY YOU LIKED IT!

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rabanitchas November 28 2013, 13:46:51 UTC
ooooohh... good writing!
I hope you write more of this soon. <3

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broken_ephemera November 28 2013, 17:19:34 UTC
AWW THANK YOU <3
I promise you'll see more of this~

...though my muse is playing on something else now...

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broken_ephemera November 28 2013, 17:20:24 UTC
AW.
It's nothing too bad!

Thank you~
The hwaiting is for me?
Darling you're too sweet :')

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broken_ephemera December 24 2013, 18:07:46 UTC
Yup for sure! ;D

No worries about it HAHA let's be friends! :D

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