Elegy of The Brokenhearted; PG-13; Taemin/Minho

[deasyellow]

Elegy of The Brokenhearted
Minho/Taemin; PG-13; ~1,400w
There’s no goodbye, either. There’s never a goodbye. That’s good, Minho thinks, because some words are better unsaid.
A/N: LMFAO WHAT IS THIS. THIS IS CRAP, I’M TELLING YOU. it’s been months since i last wrote, and i just. i can’t with this. I’M NEVER WRITING 2MIN AGAIN I’M DONE WITH THIS

Comments

[chireotamahome]

quite nice. i like the confused feelings. but too much feeling, i think i'm one of them..

[deasyellow]

yeah, i think this is really messy and confusing sobs sorry about that :(
thank you for reading though ♥

[wykedpanda]

I've missed you, darling~~ *forever hugs you* so so much, i've missed you so so so very much ;__;

Next, this piece is gorgeous. Don't you dare complain- there were a few grammatical errors, but the feeling in this piece- I adore it. I could ramble about the confusion of feelings, the little way you phrased certain words that just fit and blah blah blah- bottom line: you're awesome, and no, you haven't lost your touch. :)

[deasyellow]

omg i missed you too :( I MISSED LJ IN GENERAL ACTUALLY WHERE HAVE I BEEN SERIOUSLY.
jdfsahfkjdhfkj thank you bb! i'm not confident about my writing at all--after all i haven't touched my word doc for months :|
but thank you for saying this omg, you're too nice :') ♥

[thevanillacity]

this was really nice (:
so much melancholy and a tinge of bittersweetness
loved it. thanks for sharing (:

[deasyellow]

thank you for reading :) ♥

[intendedsarcasm]

GIVE ME A COUPLE MINUTES TO READ THIS BUT OMG DESSY WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN MY LOVE ALSGJAKSLGJLASGJ I MISSED YOU AND WAS SO WORRIED NEVER MAKE ME WORRIED LIKE THAT AGAIN ;A;

[intendedsarcasm]

“Seriously,” he hears Jonghyun sighs in defeat, “how can Taemin bear to be with you is beyond my mind.”
A thud. Ouch. It is very painful, like a hit on the stomach; a icy cold water being thrown on his head. Piercing. “He can’t,”
ouch :c

I'm so glad you're back ;A;

[deasyellow]

FHAJHFKJDHFKJA YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I MISSED YOU KATIE REAL LAIFU SUCKS I'VE BEEN WANTING TO TALK TO YOU ;________; /huggles forever and ever

thank you for reading bb! i think i've gone rusty though sobs

[intendedsarcasm]

YOU COULD HAVE LOGGED ON. I WAS SO WORRIED I THOUGHT SOMETHING HAPPENED TO YOU BUT NOTHING WAS ON YOUR FACEBOOK SO ;A;

which is why you should write more n__n

[justangel]

This is good, really good.
I'm a new reader, never seem to read your work before, but if you say this is a mess then I don't mind reading the worst of your work.

I like the thickness of emotion, and they way Taemin and Minho each dealt with their own misery. But what I love is the end. If I'm not mistaken, they were making love--or about to, right? Somehow it's very painful, but it evokes so many question at the same time, one of them being the realization that Minho and Taemin just couldn't live without each other.

Thanks for sharing :D

[deasyellow]

djskafhhdsf can i give you a hug because your comment makes me happy ;____;
thanks a lot for reading bb ♥