End of The World; PG-13; Myungsoo/Sungyeol

Oct 28, 2011 19:12

End of The World
Myungsoo/Sungyeol; PG-13; ~2,600w
They are lucky Myungsoo has just come back from Japan and is too lazy to unpack his belongings, because to escape, he thinks, they need to hurry.
A/N: slightly inspired by this. a pretty old fic (two months ago?) that i just need to put out here. you know. get it out of my system. besides, i miss ( Read more... )

fandom: infinite, pairing: myungsoo/sungyeol, rating: pg-13

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deasyellow October 28 2011, 12:43:36 UTC
spot for aurelynn ;♥;

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sunlit November 5 2011, 00:11:42 UTC
SOBBING HI BB I'M FINALLY HERE Q_____________Q i'm really sorry it took so long for this comment to come! ;a ( ... )

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deasyellow November 5 2011, 03:59:34 UTC
NGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH I HATE HOW YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS LEAVE ME SPEECHLESS OK I JUST. I CAN'T FORM A COHERENT RESPONSE BECAUSE YOU'RE SO LOVELY AND TOO NICE AND I DON'T DESERVE THIS WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS ;________________________;

i'm always grateful when people like my characterization, because that's the thing that usually holds me back from writing besides my horrible english sobs. you are too nice okay jfdajhfdak i just want to hug you and never let go do you know how much i'm grateful to you!!

i'm sure this is pretty obvious but ilu2 ♥♥♥

and happy birthday love! ♥

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sunlit November 5 2011, 08:52:14 UTC
NUUUUUUUUUU THAT'S BECAUSE YOUR FICS LEAVE ME SPEECHLESS SO I ALWAYS TYPE OUT HALF-COHERENT COMMENTS ;AAAAAA; B-BUT WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DON'T DESERVE THIS HASKJDS YOU DESERVE ALL THIS AND MORE AND I'M LIKE THIS BECAUSE ILU AND YOU KNOW IT *U* ♥

i wouldn't worry too much, if i were you - your characterization is always likeable and realistic! c: how is your english horrible dessy ;~~~~~; /hugs you and never lets go like you asked! *v* sobs why are you grateful to me i have done nothing ;;;;;;

thank youuuuuuu ♥

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yeolbear October 28 2011, 12:47:14 UTC
SPOT RAWR 8DDDDDD

here is a sunggyu c:

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yeolbear October 28 2011, 13:01:24 UTC
WHAT IS THIS I ONLY KNOW HOW TO FLAIL AND GIBBERISH WORDS THAT MAKE NO SENSE BC YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING AND ONLY SDHAUDDASDA CAN EXPRESS MY FEELS /SHOT ;AAA;

"Your laugh is weird," Sungyeol always retorts, half-asleep.
why is this so beautiful

"You make a good couple," the old man raises his eyebrow playfully, and Myungsoo frowns.
stanning this old man now mhm mhm

(his eyes are hard his eyes are teary he’s almost crying don’t cry what’s wrong are you okay)
loved, loved, loved, loved this sentence ;~~~; it's so beautiful and yet, heart-wrenching. my heart cannot take this beauty called dessy's fics.

It tastes salty, maybe because they had chips for lunch, maybe because the river is near the sea and the water has salt, or maybe Myungsoo’s ability to taste is gone, along with his ability to breathe.
CRIES THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL IDEK WHY BUT I REALLY REALLY LIKED IT ;A; ♥

"Home is where your heart is," he says, feeling cheesy as fuck, "but yeah. Let’s go home."i love the ending & you have made me fallen in love with these "i-just- ( ... )

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deasyellow October 30 2011, 02:51:29 UTC
CRIES OMG I DON'T DESERVE THIS COMMENT WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS RINNING ;~~~~~; and lmao idek what i was thinking while i was writing this THE CHEESE. IT'S SO BAD. /burns this fic to oblivion
thank you for reading and memming ;___; ♥

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andersenmom October 28 2011, 12:54:13 UTC

Cute. I wanna go with them next time.

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deasyellow October 30 2011, 02:01:11 UTC
:3
thank you for reading! ♥

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halcyondusk October 28 2011, 13:00:41 UTC
GUHHHHH WHY DO YOU DO THIS ;~~~~~;

YOU. OMG. It's like, such a sweet but sad story and I feel like Myungsoo's lost and Sungyeol's lost and they both need this trip to find themselves and take a break and in the end they find each other ;~~~~~~~~~;

"Like go, go," he answers, "to the end of the world."

Sob Myungsoo and his cheesiness what end of the world

It’s not one or two drops that you can pretend you never saw, tears that you can dodge as being a result of yawning. Sungyeol is crying, his face red and his body curved as if it’s about to break, and if he knows that Myungsoo is staring, he doesn’t show it.

I love how you wrote Sungyeol here ;~; he seems really filial and he would be the type to cry if something happened to any of his family members ;A; but this part ugh my heart

"God, I can’t believe you need to be this far from the others to do this," and he pecks the tip of his nose, smiling, because it’s kind of true, in some ways.And I think he did need to be that far to do this :3 ( ... )

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deasyellow October 30 2011, 03:01:30 UTC
WHY DO YOU DO THIS I DON'T DESERVE THIS SOBS and yeah, the cheese in this fic, idek what i was thinking lmfao OTL /hides this fic in the deepest pit of earth
thank you for reading ;____; ♥

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dongbangsuju20 October 28 2011, 13:13:25 UTC
sadnjhnfg
got linked and OMG
idek what to say, will come back tonight with a proper comment but OMG A LONG ONE SHOT MYUNGYEOL BEAUTIFUL IDEK WHATGORGEOUS FIC ♥

thank you for sharing ;~~;
i love it, a looot

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deasyellow October 30 2011, 02:02:01 UTC
cries omg thank you for reading! ♥

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