fic - original - electricity favours us

[nightcomes]

title. electricity favours us
fandom. ORIGINAL
rating. pg-13
word count. 3, 138
excerpt. Rose nodded her head and went to take off his scarf to return it to him but he shook his head and backed up. “No, no, you’re the one that has a few more blocks left of walking. Just give it back to me later. Plus, I’m a man. Men don’t get cold.” Before Rose

Comments

[underworld]

masterful, becca, truly. can't wait for novel form!!!!

*reads again*

[rewindings]

OSDFOSIDJOSDIFSOIDJSDOI holy shit becs! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOD!
Your writing is like crack. And I be addicted~ hehehe wow that was corny.
NEWHO. Srsly can't wait for more!! You are fucking good at descriptive words and sentences. I envy you!

[gimmemypickle]

I really enjoyed this! If you ever decide to write a novel, I would definitely want to read it. :)

[killmotion]

GRATUITOUS COMMENT.

Something I forgot to ask...your teacher doesn't mind the profanity? Is Canada more lax with that in general because whenever I wrote stuff in school, we were only allowed hell. And damn. Nothing else. Just wondering. ;D

[killmotion]

Makes sense. :P Cursing is also hot. Especially by sexy men.

[loveashes]

oh my word. this is amazing. ♥.