...help, I'm alive...my heart keeps beating...like a hammer....

[brokinsound]

So I have this short story I wrote a while ago....its based on a dream I had forever ago....and well I want to turn the short story into so much more

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[moparstar]

You can email it to me if you want feedback. I'll give you my honest opinion. But then again, I'm not a writer, editor, etc... so I don't know if I'd be much help. I think you still have my email.

[brokinsound]

email sent...and thank you :)