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[brokncellardoor]

i think maybe my writing skills have diminished. i actually have more than two paragraphs written but i don't like them.

He was ... magnificent. That's the only way to describe him. Unintelligent, egotistical, and magnificent. It took me awhile to realize it. My childish immaturity getting in the way of things, blinding me. The truth is the first

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[dalytreat]

I like the first paragraph.

[brokncellardoor]

thanks. i really liked that paragraph, i just don't know how to continue it to make it sound the same. the second paragraph just kind of fades.