"Dear Theodore" beginnings... written during english today

[broknkeeper]

Much love, Theodore.

The leaves have lost their green;

the world of twenty years ago

was better left unseen....

Much love, Theodore--

from stories left untold,

and dreams I’ve never dreamed about,

and thoughts I’ve never known....

I started writing to Theodore a good couple of months ago, after one night of letting my mind wonder and seeing

Comments

Wow

[anonymous]

This is amazing. As with your speech last week, it has left me mesmerized (I am constantly getting lost in your words.) It makes me want to know more about Theodore. It makes me want to write to people who I know I cant write to anymore, and ask them how they are, what they have done since the last time I saw them.
The only thing i have to add is a grammatical error: when you wrote, "Questions, answers, musings, expressions" the next word is written "the" shouldn't it be "they" or "that"?
-Josh

Re: Wow

[broknkeeper]

indeed. Damn those "y"s.

*hug* thank you for commenting. I was wondering what sensations or feelings were evoked from it, and you've said just what I was hoping for. Thank you!

Worried

[iramoved]

You haven't replied to me either on AOL or Yahoo. Have I done something wrong? Would you at least tell me what?

Re: Worried

[broknkeeper]

Wrong?
Kevin. you have done noting wrong-- sorry to make you think that. I still think you are an awesome and interesting person. and I still want to talk to you.

But right now, I'm feeling extremely lazy. I'll try to break it and respond to you quickly.

for now, gtg. until next time.