Fic TBBT: Blind chapter 4

[brolove]

Comments

[danceinacircle]

This is a good plot, but it is difficult to read because of grammar and punctuation errors. (I believe English is not your first language?) If you'd like, I'd be willing to go through and help correct those, which will make it easier to understand and enjoy. :)

[brolove]

First of all, thank you for reading.And second of all, you guessed right, I'm French^^

Thanks for offering your help, that's sweet!! I'll really appreciate and again, sorry for my lack of grammar (I'm good in English but sometimes it's hard)

[jessicajason]

Well, don't feel bad, English is one of the hardest languages in the world to learn. I agree with danceinacircle, this is a good story. Once the grammar issues are polished a bit, this little gem will really shine.

[brolove]

No, it's not that it's hard, it's just that I lack some vocabulary. I learn English in college so writing fics is a good practise (and a fun one :) )
And thanks for reading it!

[mia_liz]

I really really enjoyed this I hope you continue with it, just one this Sheldon's twin's name is actually Missy not Molly.

[brolove]

I can't believe I wrote "Molly" when I know it's Missy...
Forgive me, I blame myself^^

[wind_dork]

Good stuff.
I just have a tiny correction to make (and I swear I'm not being picky I just noticed it). Sheldon's sister is Missy not Molly.

Otherwise, keep on posting 'cause I'll keep reading!

[brolove]

Thank you!!! Yeah I know, Missy....tss I'm so dumb^^

[alsaurusrex]

I knew you were French somehow just from reading your story. =) How awesome is that!! lol

My boyfriend is Belgian so I'm used to French mistakes in English. Love the story!!