Jalex: the truth about us

Apr 07, 2010 19:26

 Title: The truth about us.
Pairing: Justin/Alex
Fandom: Wizards of Waverly Place
Warnings: Includes incest! so if you're like "eww gross, she's freak!", don't read it.
Spoilers: Don't think so :)
Summary: There's always been a spark between them. It's wrong but it feels right. But what if their parents never told them the truth?

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mrsvc April 7 2010, 17:56:14 UTC
Oooh, interesting. They do fight too much, don't they? I like how you described how Alex was feeling. I did see one thing:

Alex snorted. She grabs him by the arm, wants to give a piece of her mind. Looks deeply into her eyes.

I think you mean "his eyes" because Alex can't look into her own eyes :D

I just wanted to point that out because I know how much I hate finding typos in my work.

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brolove April 7 2010, 18:01:24 UTC
You're the first to comment! Yayy. Glad you liked it :)

Edited and changed it. Thought it would be clear...Guess not! XD

I hate typos too so thank you!

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imjustanerd April 7 2010, 18:06:38 UTC
I love it! I can't wait till you post the second part (even though I've read it already lol)

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brolove April 7 2010, 18:13:26 UTC
HAHA thanks! you're my beta reader after all ;)

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Dalenafan dalenafan April 7 2010, 18:06:42 UTC
is cute .. I love the tension between justin and alex

*--*

Good work!

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Re: Dalenafan brolove April 7 2010, 18:13:52 UTC
Thank you so much! Oh and it's awesome that i know you on Twitter! <33

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dalenafan April 7 2010, 18:08:56 UTC
<3 i^m @madimires on twitter Lol

I hope the second part <3

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jlxology April 8 2010, 01:03:48 UTC
Aww, classic Slap Slap Kiss!Jalex! Missed this so much in the actual WOWP.

Part 2, Part 2, Part 2!!!

Welcome to the fandom. I still remember my first time... writing Jalex fic. :P Fun, no?

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brolove April 8 2010, 13:05:56 UTC
Thanks, I love these 2 so much!

Happy you liked it! :D. It is definitely fun. Part 2 is written, just have to post it ;)

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