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AU Fic: Domina Cariño (7/?)

Jun 19, 2011 16:10

Domina Cariño (7/?)
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 1,024
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
Warning: Some parts (not all) may contain minor yet integral BDSM scenes/themes.
A/N: I know I kinda stirred it up in last week's comments, but ( Read more... )

fernando torres, domina cariño, sernando, sergio ramos, au, fic

Comments 29

bleedingdagger June 19 2011, 16:22:38 UTC

i love how fernando is getting him to change up his plans (which was fernando's plan after all). i love this other side of sergio, dominant and a little possessive.

i wonder where fernando has been? i hope it's part of his plan and he hasnt gotten hurt or anything :\

lovely update as usual!

brontok June 22 2011, 14:37:13 UTC

Don't worry, he's not hurt! Well, he's physically okay, that is! :-D

kissmecait17 June 19 2011, 17:46:09 UTC

I love you so much for writing this story. I was really not sure at first if I would like it and now, 7 chapters in, I'm in love. This is such a well-written chapter. The flow is gorgeous and learning even more about Sergio, seeing this through his eyes, is amazing.
And even though we're seeing Sergio's POV, you've written Fernando perfectly. We see the hesitation in him. I could really just go on and on and on but I'll stop. Lovely work.

brontok June 22 2011, 14:44:40 UTC

I'm glad you came to like it; tbh, I like how this turned out too - this is probably my favorite chapter that came out of my head, so far.
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I hope you like the next part/s that will be coming out soon!

notoriousjk June 19 2011, 18:19:48 UTC

ooouuffff!

Brilliant as usual! So maybe Sergio doesn't know what Nando does, because I think, from his frustration & worry about where Nando goes & what he does when he's gone & nando's unwillingness to tell him anything, that he doesn't really know.

I love to see Sergio loosening up a bit (and Nando making breakfast in the morning was adorable, and the idea of them fucking against the counter is hot of course) I dont' want him to lose all of his adorable uptightness though!

I find it very intriguing that Nando continues to let Sergio fuck him. Maybe this is a way for him to keep his two lives &, seemingly, different personalities separate. Like when he's at work, being a dom, he doesn't have to think about Sergio topping him, he can compartmentalize. Does that even make sense?

Sorry for the ramble. Loved it!

brontok June 22 2011, 14:47:51 UTC

No need to be sorry, I like to hear what people who read this think. And Sergio still has plenty of things to be (adorably) uptight about! :-D

baronessbadger June 19 2011, 18:47:21 UTC

Oh. Mygod.

brontok June 22 2011, 14:50:00 UTC

:-D were you pleasantly surprised?
and oh, how did you get that whiskers thingy in your icon thingy?

baronessbadger June 22 2011, 18:02:03 UTC

Very!

It's a custom userhead, I was gifted with some LJ tokens and bought it with those. :)

dld_ftw June 19 2011, 19:08:26 UTC

This was unbelievably scorching. I love how they've almost changed roles. I think I said way back in my chapter one comment that the people who are the most in control in their lives and work tend to want to cede control on some level. An old roomie of mine is a professional dom and she said most of her clients are execs/people in high positions of authority and since they are dominant all the time, they find release in letting go of that control. I love that it seems like that is what Nando is doing here. It's like the roles keep switching constantly and I love it so much. Sergio ceded control by going to a dom and now that he's broken his routine, it's freeing him to become dominant in a relationship in a way that he never has been before. Nando is letting Sergio run the show (to a point)and he's interestingly passive in so many ways. It's fascinating. I actually thought he would be gone when Sergio work up. I was so surprised that he stayed and then kept coming back. He gets to let someone else take care of him. However, by ( ... )

brontok June 22 2011, 14:57:23 UTC

It's like you're reading my mind! Haha, lucky of you to have such an interesting roommate; I have a lot of questions for her! In the meantime, I have to rely on armchair psychology and amateur research.. I'm glad I'm not too far off! :-D
And I like your analysis! A++

dld_ftw June 22 2011, 16:02:27 UTC

Alas, former roommate from many years ago.:-) She became a dom after we lived together. She considers it a public service, quite frankly! The way she discusses her work is very interesting. (BTW, my current roomie is also very interesting, but not in the same way!)

Can't wait to read more!