AU Fic: Domina Cariño (9/?)

[brontok]

Domina Cariño (9/?)
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 853
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
Warning: Some parts (not all) may contain minor yet integral BDSM scenes/themes.

Comments

[difusion]

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I exploded, because I just see through this fic completely. It's--er--hard to explain but, let's just say that this fic is making me happier than anything else hhahsdfghjuk.

[brontok]

Aw, I'm glad! I want you happy *so you can write a fluffy Sernando story*
Hahaha, don't mind me, I love how your recent stories are so heartwrenchingly good! T.T

[notoriousjk]

*sigh*

Oh Sergio. I do love knowing more about him & his "adorable uptightness".

I find this line very very interesting.

He thinks then about the irony of being the one who’s needling and controlling yet having his actions depend so much on someone letting him.

I think this is the point of the whole fic & this wonderful line describes it so concisely.

It is also is very revealing-from Nando's perspective it seemed like Sergio was the one that was very much in control (although Nando did give himself the option of leaving & of letting Sergio being in control so that he could keep his "two lives" separate), but here we see that Sergio, although he sees himself as a controlling person, he actually doesn't feel like he has much control in this "relationship", because it depends on Fernando "letting" him.

I would like to see more of Olalla ;-)

Love the bit about the pickles & onions-he he I get it Fernando.

fantastico!!!

*and I have rambled again

[brontok]

Any sort of rambling is welcome here! I'm a rambler myself :-D
And thank you, I'm glad you love that line! spent so much time trying to find a place for that in Sergio's musings.. wasn't it too "expository"?
Also, I don't know if Olalla will make any more appearances, but she will have at least another mention. You know, I thought I was gonna write Pepe into this (being the BDSM club minder that Sergio met in Part1), but alas..

[jumping_down]

I love that last scene where he sees the love mark and it reminds him of Nando. ♥

[brontok]

:-)))) I'm glad! It's a clue! *wink wink* ah I can't keep my mouth shut, I haven't even written it yet!