Domina Cariño (12/?)

[brontok]

Domina Cariño (12/?)
Type: AU
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 1,200
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
A/N: I changed my mind; this chapter turned out to be a long one and will be a separate chapter on its own, and the previous one will

Comments

[notoriousjk]

Loved it, will come back to leave a proper reply later. :-)

[brontok]

hey, thanks for taking the time! :-) I'm keeping an eye on Detroit Waves as well!

[notoriousjk]

Right finally coming back to this to comment & of course i loved it & wow yeah Sergio is right & I guess I didn't see it until he said it, but what Fernando did is a complete violation of trust-he held all the control, even though he let Sergio take control in the bedroom, knowing something Sergio didn't. I suspect however, very strongly, that there is a lot more to this, at least from Fernando's pov & his reasons for doing what he did.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

[brontok]

*belatedly wipes your tears*
Thank you for the compliment, I do appreciate it! :-D i've been neglecting you lately, but I'm done with exams and I'm leaving school (hahahaha, at least for next semester), so i can be a better ~dealer~

[baronessbadger]

Oh, Fernando. He's just in way over his head now, isn't he? And now the panic is setting in because he actually gives a fuck about Sergio...

“Don’t go.” Fernando whispers it, another thing to add to the list. But when it finally registers, he already means it. oohh, Fernando. I don't think Sergio has any idea how hard that was for him. Or really how difficult all of it is for him. Not that lying was the way to go, but. Ooh. :'(

Sergio still submitting until the last moment and remembering to use the safe word and fjdasklvnaskl Freckle.

Gaaahhh.

<3 You know I love this. I can't wait for the next part!

[brontok]

Oh, I love you, you caught the angst (of course).
Please wait until Wednesday the latest for the next part, but I posted the full version of the oneshot I've been doing to tide you over in the meantime! :-D

[baronessbadger]

Of course ;)

I will be counting the hours until next Wednesday, haha. But the one-shot is a nice surprise!

lindo

[sophie30]

I never read alternate reality, but its history is, is wonderful, bright, dense, strong ... there'll be here ripping compliments all the time.
love your fic.ok
updating makes me happy.

Re: lindo

[brontok]

Thanks! I'll try to make you even more happy, I'm gonna have more time now for updating, and I have a short story (Real) for you in the meantime. :-D

[stin8774]

OH noo.. Poor Sergio. Must be hard to figure out that the person he kinda like, has been lying to him :(
Sadly Nando is late at figuring that he has feeling for Sergio.
Please make them happy(together)? *begs*

This fic holds a special place in my heart, it really do. I think it's one of my favorites =) LOVE IT
(more soon, please? Can't wait)

[brontok]

Aw, really? I'm glad you fave this, I'll post more soon. I have a Sernando oneshot in the meantime, hope that tides you over. just click over to my latest entry