Tumultuous Peace...

Jul 02, 2008 07:33


Stillness clings to the skeleton-like array of half finished metalworking projects in the pre-dawn darkness of the campsite.  Husks of things left undone add to the intense quiet that permeates the uninhabited and unattended work area.  The partially built monstrosity of the construct that was to be an amusement resembles none of the intention, ( Read more... )

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barelyventrue July 2 2008, 14:19:34 UTC
"...before the dawn has a chance to cut short the lives of the nocturnal."

I don't know why, but I really loved this turn of phrase.

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brother_mycah July 2 2008, 14:22:55 UTC
Thanks :)

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houseofwings July 2 2008, 14:29:39 UTC
I've been enjoying the descriptions of the steel-work as it's grown and become more complex. Great stuff.

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brother_mycah July 2 2008, 14:36:42 UTC
Thanks! :)

Yeah, I've been trying to make the idea that there's more and more projects unfinished to reflect his increasingly chaotic and tortured mindframe.

Plus, this is a great canvas to try out new descriptors and see their reception from people whose opinions I value. :)

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itsnotroach July 2 2008, 15:05:57 UTC
Hurray! Joe isn't dead. Tammy will be relieved. It's not like she can find another giant out there to do her bidding. ;P

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brother_mycah July 2 2008, 15:25:16 UTC
Well, not yet anyway...

...and I'm totally sure you could find a way to convince pretty much anyone (giant or no) to do anything you wanted them to...

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