Fic: Life of Syvek, Pt. 1

Apr 18, 2011 15:13

Title: Life of Syvek, Pt. 1
Author: brown-polyester
Universe/Series: Star Trek: TOS
Rating: NC-17 at times
Relationship status: Established
Word count: 10,062 total; 4,451 this part
Genre: Humor, Fluff, Romance, Drama
Tropes: Kidfic, Family
Warnings: None
Additional Pairings: A little Syvek/OFC, but the kid's 2.5-ish, so... yeah...
Author's Notes: ( Read more... )

kidfic, kirk/spock, fic author: brown_polyester, rated: nc-17, star trek

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brown_polyester April 20 2011, 03:13:48 UTC
Thanks so much! Yeah, Syvek won't leave me alone, so I'm sure there will be plenty more. I have 2 full-length fics (i.e. not just little bits and pieces) in the works and some other plot bunnies percolating, so stay tuned!

And I edited the post so it actually links to part 2 now! Yay!

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marlee813 April 19 2011, 01:24:51 UTC
I'm sorry. But this is the greatest kid!fic series I've ever read. Ive been currently laughing my ass of at the antics of Syvek. He is so freaking adorable and cute. Amazing. I've never laughed this hard in a fic... Ever. <33

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brown_polyester April 20 2011, 03:15:52 UTC
Thanks! Don't be sorry! I'm glad you think he's cute because I do too! I really hope he doesn't come across as a Mary Sue or Gary Stu or whatever other names there are for that kind of character. He's based on various kids at the daycare where I work, and I promise that those kids are NOT Mary Sues. At all. Ok, maybe sometimes!

And I edited the post so it actually links to part 2 now! Yay!

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marlee813 April 20 2011, 04:00:49 UTC
He definitely doesn't come across as a Mary Sue character. He's so unique and awesome. I want a son like that. I honestly can't tell you enough how much I've laughed at this story and the prequels before it. It is like nothing I've ever read. And its so good!! You are amazing at writing humor, I can't even comprehend it! <33 KEEP WRITING ALL THE TIME!!

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blumvale April 19 2011, 13:03:39 UTC
I love this so much!!

have you linked part 2 and 3 or are they just not up yet cause I really wanna read them and can't :(

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brown_polyester April 20 2011, 03:17:49 UTC
Argh! Sorry about that. I spent about three freaking hours trying to make sure I had this all correct before I actually posted it on the Kirk/Spock community and the Star Twek community. And I failed on the link. Oh well, it's fixed now! Sorry!

Thanks, though, for your comment! It makes me want to write more.... :D

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ariadnechan April 19 2011, 18:46:12 UTC
poor JIM!!!!
that was too much!!

i'm half certain, Spock did that on purpose in order to sniff him on Jim!
(that kinky Vulcan!)

and i happy that bby Syvek is already walking!

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brown_polyester April 20 2011, 03:27:01 UTC
Yeah, I felt bad for Jim, too. Especially considering how freaking awesome it must've been to wake up like that! But that's the kind of stuff that happens when you cater to your kid's every single tiny insignificant need. The moral of that story is that it's okay to let your kid cry once in a while. It's GOOD to let your kid cry. They get super irritating when they're spoiled. So take a damn shower! :)

I like the idea that Syvek is kind of a slow bloomer, like when Kirk freaked out that he wasn't rolling over yet at 3 months (which isn't that bad) in the first story. So he's a late bloomer, but when he picks something up, he runs with it. Like how quickly he learns to read in part three of this one (spoiler? nah), and how much his pronunciation improves over just a few months. Anyway...

And I edited the post so it actually links to part 2 now! Yay!

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karmic_fic April 22 2011, 01:14:05 UTC
this is just so much fun! your scenes are so filled with love and laughter and yet completely realistic, I LOVE IT!!!

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