Comments | browneydweasley: A Christmas ficlet

browneydweasley

A Christmas ficlet

Dec 16, 2006 01:31

Harry slumps into a chair, exhausted. He’s supervised the first flights of new brooms, played endless games of wizard’s chess and exploding snap, mended boo-boo’s, attended tea parties, and even changed a new baby doll’s nappy. He is without a doubt the favorite uncle of all twenty Weasley nieces and nephews.

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pan_alchemist December 16 2006, 07:41:02 UTC

As I said before, this was very beautiful.

I could feel her pain. You did an excellent job bringing it to life.

browneydweasley December 16 2006, 15:56:31 UTC

Thank you so much for everything with this one. **hugs**

phoenixankaa December 16 2006, 08:28:03 UTC

That was wonderfully written. Sad in the aspect of it all, yet very sweet and touching. You bring across their feelings without having to delve deeply into their issues. Perfectly Harry and Ginny.

I've always felt Harry would love Ginny unconditionally; just having her in his life would be his greatest treasure. You impart that perfectly.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

PA

browneydweasley December 16 2006, 16:09:31 UTC

Thank you so much!

I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Truly,their unconditional love for one another is their greatest treasure, and yet, at the same time, because they have so much love to share, it brings them such pain under the circumstances.

It always means so much to get such nice feedback from an author I admire. Thanks again!

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browneydweasley December 16 2006, 16:10:17 UTC

Thanks! Don't know that I could receive a nicer comment...:D

echo067 December 16 2006, 18:45:56 UTC

I wanted to cry for them. And I'm not going to lie, it made me want to know more. Very beautiful, browneyes. :hugs:

browneydweasley December 16 2006, 23:39:42 UTC

Thanks! I have toyed with the idea of expanding it, as for most of the sites, a story must be at least 1,000 to qualify for posting. But right now, I think it's just as long as needs to be, and honestly, I am happy to have this one off my heart...

You seem to write from the heart lauragene December 16 2006, 22:12:50 UTC

I wouldn't call it melancholy... More wistful than sad, more wishful than regret. You've written another lovely story.

Merry Christmas....

Re: You seem to write from the heart browneydweasley December 16 2006, 23:40:57 UTC

Such genuine feedback is the best present I could hope for. Lots of love...Merry Christmas!