david/carrie fic

Mar 29, 2009 20:50

Title: Bless the Broken Road 3/?
Rating: pretty PG for now
Ships: Dave/Carrie <3
Disclaimer: I obviously don't own squat!

please excues my horrible spelling and grammer. haha and comments are appreciated :D

part 1
part 2.

Round 3. )

david cook, undercook: carrie/david, fanfiction, carrie underwood

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jeanos53 March 30 2009, 09:55:51 UTC
I loved it! The smut was sweet and hot. They are so amazing together. I can't wait for more!

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brucasinlove April 1 2009, 05:49:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!! :D

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chemicalwonder April 3 2009, 00:25:35 UTC
Awww! I love this! Definitely your best chapter yet!

I am so loving the way they are together, their chemistry and banter is beyond adorable. And the sex scene... Oh my that was brilliant. So sweet and sexy. I especially loved the mentions of them both being musicians and that giving them some advantages. And them undressing each other was so sensual, I really loved the way how it all led to the climax. :D

She cuddled closer to his naked body smiling contently, laying her head on his chest finding harmony in the listening to the soft beat of his heart.

The mental image is beyond adorable! <3

Boo to the press! I felt bad for her when she was crying and for him when he thought he should leave. Fortunately she asked him to stay, way to go Carrie! :D

Neal's text message cracked me up. xD

LOL @ the hickeys and her helping him to do a body scan. :D

Love these two and love this fic, I can't wait for more! Excellent work!

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brucasinlove April 3 2009, 05:33:26 UTC
Glad you liked it!!! I think my favorite part was the hickeys part. lol :D

the next chapter will be up soon :D

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