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Oct 25, 2009 17:34

Day 24 of writing_festPrompt: Setting: Up a tree ( Read more... )

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whichclothes October 25 2009, 22:53:47 UTC
Welcome back! Hope you had a good week. It's nice to find another entry from you.

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brunettepet October 25 2009, 23:07:51 UTC
It was a good week, thanks for asking. It's weird to be offline for so long, though, especially when surrounded by family with iPhones and laptops in constant contact with the outside world! I felt like a bumpkin in the big city.

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whichclothes October 25 2009, 23:13:04 UTC
Hee! I'm busy trying to figure out how I can get internet when we visit my inlaws in December. :-)

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entrenous88 October 26 2009, 00:02:01 UTC
Eeee, I love that last line!

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brunettepet October 26 2009, 01:51:02 UTC
Thank you. She's like a cat getting out of the way of unwanted pets!

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enigmaticblues October 26 2009, 01:19:37 UTC
This was a fantastic response to the prompt!

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brunettepet October 26 2009, 01:53:04 UTC
Thanks! Buffy's tree is an unsung character in canon.

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thismaz October 26 2009, 06:14:29 UTC
This is very vivid. The nostalgia is there in the first line, in Buffy's affection for the tree and the conjuring of memories of season 1? season 2? when her Mom was away, but she used it through habit.
And the description of Spike is lovely - the laugh lines are too often ignored by people writing him, maybe because he doesn't smile like that much, before season 7.
Thank you. I enjoyed this.

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brunettepet October 26 2009, 15:05:08 UTC
The nostalgia is there in the first line, in Buffy's affection for the tree and the conjuring of memories of season 1? season 2? when her Mom was away, but she used it through habit. Thank you, that's exactly the feeling I was going for.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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