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[brunettepet]

writing_fest Day 14

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[velvetwhip]

This is a very nice vignette.

Gabrielle

[brunettepet]

Thank you. I'm left wondering if she'll actually be able to play anything at all.

[whichclothes]

I am so enjoying these!!

[brunettepet]

Thanks! I'm surprised how much Dawn I'm writing. I'm glad you don't mind.

[brunettepet]

The closet full of abandoned projects and past times makes me a bit blue, too. Thanks for reading.

[pearlseed]

Real sweet, this one, any time you delve into an attic for childhood memories...lovely story.

[brunettepet]

It's made all the more bittersweet when those childhood memories aren't even real! Dawn is becoming fascinating to me.

[orchidluv]

Really nice. I have to admit, it took me a moment to figure out who Hank was - did we know their father's name? My first thought it was her instructor's name, but the second reading made me think Dawn was rejecting the title 'father'. I liked this glimpse into Dawn's past, especially the paradox of her wondering if the music would sound as sweet as she "remembered".

[brunettepet]

Thank you for reading and commenting. These prompts have been great fun. For some reason the strangeness of Dawn being a construct has suddenly fascinated me.

Hank's name is mentioned a couple of times in canon, though he's certainly even more obscure than some peripheral characters. I don't think he's even mentioned after Joyce dies.