Somebody's gonna get laid the f--- out

[brushajan73]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19808813/

if you're interested in the dramatic conclusion to my love epic... there's the link... it actually sucks, but if you're in for a good laugh

Comments

[brittheshit]

first of all, you're welcome for the song! =P

I'm just going to make some comments as I go along:
`First of all, the whole "he was totally checking you out" segment reminds me oh-so-much of a certain meat cutter that checked out a friend of mine ;)
`Britney had a way of seducing guys without even trying. She oozed sex appeal. - Haha, don't I wish?
`I like how stubborn Rebecca is... it's almost annoying, lol. But she's cute about it.
`OMG YOU SAID NO GLOVE NO LOVE. I cannot express how much I love you right at this moment, LOL.
`Aww, this was an adorable story! I don't see why you think it sucks, I think it's cute! =) It had romance, it had some angst, and it had some comic relief... all ingredients of a good story. I think you did an awesome job! We definitely should write something together.

[brushajan73]

thanks!

if we wrote something together, that would be hoTT (with 2 capital T's!)

[oceans_pearl11]

o geez, when he left i was just thinking 'wow, now thats a case of wam bam thank you mam'
and i can tell u def were reading the notebook, in fact i think i may have caught a quote in there somewhere.
I loved it, it was sooo cute and u def can't stop writing. next story - prince wils is getting some love? lol see ya at 7

[chacitabanana14]

wonderful story:) it was ADORABLE, i like that you used the no glove, and noah, it made me smile.

and very nice way of sneaking in those subtle hints that they got busy.."he pulled on his pants and walked her back to her house" something like that:-p

that was amazing!