stop.... comment fic time!
so ginevrawp, erica_lopeezy and myself are stuck in fic limbo so we are having comment fic time.
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everyone is welcum to join if you'd like
choose a pairing and prompt.
TFLN, lyrics, quotes, anything goes.
rpf, crossover, au, etc.
the crackier the better
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when filming wraps up, andrew really wants to believe he and jesse will stay in touch and continue to live in each other's pockets. by the time the press tour is done, he already has jesse's mobile number on speed-dial.
they talk and text and jesse jokes that if this was a couple of decades ago, our friendship would be nonexistent. andrew laughs at his friend as some lady applies purple make-up around his eye and tells him he knows a guy who can make some telegraphs happen ( ... )
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dude, everything can mix, this is college.
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It's the usual scenario - guys sees girl, guy asks for her number, guy invites her out ( ... )
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There is booze and moans and morning afters but this time there is no girl.
when is there EVER a girl with these futbal players? lol, never!
They kissed (more like Sergio forced his tongue down Gonzalo's mouth) on a Tuesday, almost a whole month after they met.
i have a THING for sentences like these, that give out facts that seem non-important but they just make everything so much, richer? i think thats the word
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yeah richer is the word, and so do I. it gives it a little
extra to the writing.
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Mila didn't know if shit sucked because Max wasn't there, or if Max wasn't there because shit sucked. When you had invested so much of your life in a person, the line tends to blur.
If she was being honest with herself (which she never was) she would realize that shit sucked before him, when life was one martini after another with a random fuck in the middle. When being able to remember the night before was something to be proud of.
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Mila didn't change for him.
That was part of the reason he stayed, but it was also why he left.
There were still hookups and drinks till she hit the floor, but this time there was Max to pick her up at 4am and fight with her in the morning when he saw the marks.
She almost liked keeping him miserable. Almost.
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He left one morning without a goodbye or a fuck you.
Mila thought it was fitting.
There were no forgotten clothes, toothbrushes or photos.
He had taken everything of his. Everything but the girl between the red sheets trying to figure out why life sucked.
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ugh i love your take on the kunis. more lili from black swan than how i usually write her. and your writing.opening sentence: bam. dead
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honey where´ve you been?
cell turned off I waited here
by the phone again
just like last night
think I can
sort of understand
what your life´s like
all new friends
all the parties and
how you win them
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it started at a party, like most modern-day hollywood romances.
he was there with his girl and she held a champagne flute with one hand and a cigarette with the other.
mila saw him before he caught a glimpse of her. this, he doesn't know.
this, he'll never know.
he was there with his girl but that didn't stop him from asking for her number.
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the meaningless texts start three weeks after that.
the stupid hipstamatic photos a month after.
he doesn't call until three months after and it's a quick one.
"you look like shit." she said once she opened the door.
"nice to see you too."
there was no wine orchard liquor. he was there for a reason and she knew that too well, three months of foreplay is three months too long in hollywood.
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the stupid hipstamatic photos a month after.
he doesn't call until three months after and it's a quick one.
gahhhhhh teach me your ways labi.
how do you say everything but with so little words.
i love that it takes three months before they hook up.
talk about an unconventional courtship in so cal, never mind hollywood.
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