i love love lovedddd this chapter! i'll review in more detail on ffn when it decides to let people sign in again, but i wanted to say thanks for putting it up on here =) -Lucy
And I guess since Bella is a horrible liar, the Cullen family will know of the current situation soon.
This is getting more and more suspenseful (<- I don't even know if that's a word haha) I love it!
I also love the strong bond Jasper & Alice have. The way she still remembers him in her memory despite everything that's happening to her is just amazing.
This chapter was great. Hope FFN sorts it's stuff out soon so you can keep em' coming. :)
By the way, it's cool how the little moments in your stories link together, like how Alice is first seen reading Lewis Carroll in RBTL and we find out that she still has the original copy that Jasper bought her. Very nice touch.
I like to link everything together. All four of my stories are linked. It definitely helps me write with more depth if I can carry the history I create from story to story.
Hehe. Apoligies for the lack of name. I don't really leave comments a lot (though I really enjoy your stories) so I am not sure how the names work. I am not cyber-savvy it seems.
The links make for a great read and I am a huge fan of the book Alice in Wonderland :P
That was sooo aweosme!! All three chapters were really great. But the first is def. my favorite, i loved the emotion in it. And the way that Alice (and the reader) just knew/felt that something bad was going to happen.
Loved the Jasper/Alice scene in her memory!
SRBS has a very different feel than any of the oneshots in RBTL. But their both great! :DD
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And I guess since Bella is a horrible liar, the Cullen family will know of the current situation soon.
This is getting more and more suspenseful (<- I don't even know if that's a word haha) I love it!
I also love the strong bond Jasper & Alice have. The way she still remembers him in her memory despite everything that's happening to her is just amazing.
Can't wait for the next one!
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And suspenseful is a real word!
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By the way, it's cool how the little moments in your stories link together, like how Alice is first seen reading Lewis Carroll in RBTL and we find out that she still has the original copy that Jasper bought her. Very nice touch.
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I like to link everything together. All four of my stories are linked. It definitely helps me write with more depth if I can carry the history I create from story to story.
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The links make for a great read and I am a huge fan of the book Alice in Wonderland :P
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All three chapters were really great. But the first is def. my favorite, i loved the emotion in it. And the way that Alice (and the reader) just knew/felt that something bad was going to happen.
Loved the Jasper/Alice scene in her memory!
SRBS has a very different feel than any of the oneshots in RBTL. But their both great! :DD
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