Inspiration Day: Ships That Don't Work

Jul 10, 2012 10:44

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Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture marzipanilla July 10 2012, 20:03:52 UTC
(Not sure if this is that shippy, but I tried ( ... )

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture wishflsinfl July 10 2012, 20:08:06 UTC
This is sweet and quite shippy. I like the connections that Saul draws and how he recognizes Laura's aloneness in her faith.

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture marzipanilla July 10 2012, 20:24:10 UTC
Thanks. I think this is actually the first time I've done a Saul POV, so I'm glad his thought processing worked out.

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture hobbit_kate July 11 2012, 05:24:20 UTC
Saul and Laura comfort on/after NC is totally what I was looking for! It's just perfect, doesn't need to be any shippier than this :-)

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture marzipanilla July 11 2012, 06:38:26 UTC
Glad this was what you were after :)

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture fragrantwoods July 16 2012, 19:56:25 UTC
Oh, this made me tear up for both of them. This is a special kind of shippiness, almost bromance. There's so much agape love here in such a tragic place.

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture marzipanilla July 17 2012, 18:46:47 UTC
Bromance seems to be going around, lately.

Tragedy is such a useful stepping stone in bringing people closer to others and their faith.

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture marzipanilla July 17 2012, 18:47:09 UTC
Thank you.

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture plaid_slytherin July 16 2012, 23:09:57 UTC
Eee! Saul/Laura! I'm so glad someone wrote this!

This is lovely. I really like the faith connection, since I have religious!Saul in my headcanon. It fits perfectly here as a connection between them.

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Re: Title: Mantra Rating: T Warngings: Allusions to torture marzipanilla July 17 2012, 18:48:40 UTC
:)
It was fun to write.

Religious Saul really works for me too. I don't exactly see him going to temple, but I can see him having regular.. chats, or something along that vein.

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somadanne July 17 2012, 00:27:17 UTC
Oh, this is just fascinating and chilling.

Saul used to be a solider.

My heart just breaks for Saul here, and I'm just shuddering thinking of how you have him overhear Laura. Then I really like the connection you make at the end between the two of them and what he hopes to learn from her.

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marzipanilla July 18 2012, 06:40:36 UTC
Whatever Saul is on NC, until he just fights back, isn't defined. Retired? Mustered out? Fighting would be what he knows, but defining why..

I think the two of them could have built each other up quite a bit if they were willing to share with one another at that time.

Thanks for commenting.

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