Friday Night Fun Post

[plaid_slytherin]

Hot and Cold

As I fill in for our traveling mods, the thing on my mind most this week is that it's hot. At least where I am, it is. And the best thing for heat is to cool off

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Numb (Roslin/Zarek)

[marzipanilla]

The cold had seeped into her skin, slowing her muscles and making her bones feels heavy. Her fingers were clumsy and awkward on the zipper of her borrowed jeans, prompting her to send a tangible huff of annoyance into the air

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[hobbit_kate]

I love these two keeping warm together :)

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[marzipanilla]

They certainly should get to it more often :)

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[madampresident]

I love it! I'm addicted to this pairing and this was a great characterization!

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[marzipanilla]

Thanks. I'm quite fond of them myself.

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[fragrantwoods]

Very nice--this is such a conflicted pairing and you highlighted freezing!Laura's POV so well.

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[marzipanilla]

Thank you.

(heh, that icon)

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[marzipanilla]

Thanks.

Her not being all that into it sort of just ended up happening -laugh- It works for the moment.

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[wishflsinfl]

This sentence is quite amazing:

She felt like a stone sweating in the thaw.

It really brings all of the sensory details and hot/cold sensations of the fic together.

/writing geekery

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[marzipanilla]

That sentence surprised me and almost made me jump into a bunch of metaphors based around the seasons. I'm glad I reigned those in, but I'm quite happy with that particular set of words myself!

Thank you for commenting.

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[laura_mayfair]

LJ always seems to eventually bring me to Roslin/Zarek these days. I love your writing and just realized that you are, I think, the Marzi that I've read on ff.net. Great descriptions here and quite sexy. Really enjoyed this.

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[marzipanilla]

R/Z is a great thing to keep ending up at!
Yes, that Marzi is me. Sorry I haven't been getting back to your reviews from there. I don't like their reply system all that much and I've been a little scatterbrained lately...

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[laura_mayfair]

Oh, no worries. I'm glad you got the reviews and it's nice to find you here. I'm still a LJ newbie but (slowly) getting the hang of it.
I'm just happy that I've found a little more R/Z. It's relatively rare so when you do stumble an R/Z story, it's kind of like finding your favorite flavor of candy at the bottom of the bag when you were just so certain there were no more left.