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raisintorte in bsg1000

Drunk Fic Challenge

Apr 01, 2005 00:50

Title: Caught ( Read more... )

Comments 11

burntcopper April 1 2005, 12:13:59 UTC

awww. and :snerk:

thefannishwaldo April 1 2005, 13:10:07 UTC

" She never thought of herself as a prude, but it might be time to reconsider. She was pretty sure she had never done anything that made the kind of sounds Starbuck and Apollo were making."

These two lines had me laughing out loud. Poor Cally... between you and me she's having a pretty rough time of it all. :)

Waldo.

raisintorte April 1 2005, 13:45:01 UTC

Thanks for reading, I'm glad it made you laugh. Do you have any suggestions for things I could do different? I had my fiance (who is also a BSG fan) read through it before I posted. However, neither of us has written anything non legal in the last 3-4 years so we're at a bit of a disadvantage. Any help would be appreciated.

nancy777ca July 12 2005, 01:10:34 UTC

This was thoroughly enjoyable! Well done.

raisintorte July 12 2005, 02:46:45 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

thekatebeyond July 19 2005, 20:55:55 UTC

Irk. LJ just ate my comment.

This really made me giggle. Cally seems like the type to wind up stuck in that situation alright!

This was your first? It's pretty darn good! (That's surprising, because first attempts often, ummm, aren't.)

raisintorte July 19 2005, 21:05:54 UTC

Irk. LJ just ate my comment.
I *hate* it when that happens!!!

Thank you!! See positive reinforcement is a good thing. :-) I thought I had a Kara story done but I gave it to Andy and he asked where the rest of it was. :-/ Whoops.

thekatebeyond July 19 2005, 22:18:20 UTC

*giggle* Yeah, I've had
say that to me. And I'm always like "It sounded like an ending to me!" But then I end up revising it and always think it's better. Watch how many of my stories have author's notes that say "Pixie, I hope you like the new ending!"

raisintorte July 19 2005, 22:41:44 UTC

My problem is I kinda like the end of this one. It was just a little ficlet. I don't think he got that. Oh well. I will have plenty of time to fiddle around with it once I am done with the bar and the wedding. :-)

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