Comments | bsg1000: Challenge #5 (Mealtime) Fic: Mess

nightsister in bsg1000

Challenge #5 (Mealtime) Fic: Mess

Mar 03, 2005 21:29

Hello, first time poster. *waves ( Read more... )

Comments 14

bantha_fodder March 4 2005, 02:57:25 UTC

Ah, that's nice. I liked it. Top job!

nightsister March 6 2005, 05:03:16 UTC

Ah, love those SW usernames. ;)

Thanks for reading!

svilleficrecs March 4 2005, 03:34:51 UTC

Awww. Starbuck needs a nice long nap with her head on Lee's lap, with him stroking her hair till she falls asleep. Very sweet. You show lee's tired, sweet affection for her, as well as his bewilderment at her.

nightsister March 6 2005, 05:06:04 UTC

Thanks. :)

And yes, the whole "FTL jumps every 33 minutes" premise simply blew my mind. It's amazing how hard the human body can be pushed. But then you still need stims...

mgunby March 4 2005, 03:43:48 UTC

i meant to comment earlier, but i'm a bad person. ^)^

I really like this piece. I think you capture their voices well.

nightsister March 6 2005, 05:07:28 UTC

I'm glad you're in this comm. Maybe you'll be inspired too, hm? :)

ancarett March 4 2005, 04:10:40 UTC

Oh, they're such a pair of mixed up kids, aren't they? You make them run the gamut in this mealtime setting. Really, really fun and I love the ending!

nightsister March 6 2005, 05:14:11 UTC

Thanks! I wish I could say that I meant to end it that way, but I was running out of space and thought it could stand on its own. Now you know the truth. *sheepish*

amphetamine_47 March 4 2005, 05:07:32 UTC

Poor Kara and Lee... I enjoyed this...all the little layers lurking underneath what they were saying was quite nice :)

nightsister March 6 2005, 05:12:01 UTC

You know, I'm basically a die-hard slasher, but I really LOVE the idea of Kara/Lee, even if they never act on it or it's unrequited (from either character). It feels sort of incestuous, but it's not, and that just adds to the complexity.

Thanks for reading! :)