Comments | bsg_slashathon: Fic: Romper Stomper 1/1 Gaeta/Jammer

i_want_2 in bsg_slashathon

Fic: Romper Stomper 1/1 Gaeta/Jammer

Mar 09, 2008 06:43

Title: Romper Stomper ( Read more... )

event: blind ficathon, fic: gaeta/jammer

Comments 5

pairatime March 9 2008, 18:58:24 UTC

wow, I'm not the big fan of Gaeta or Jammer but you wrote them very well and make it so belivable. very nice story

i_want_2 March 9 2008, 19:01:56 UTC

Thank you. They were the two in the series I haven't despised at one time or another.

pairatime March 9 2008, 19:22:07 UTC

the sho does have that effect doesn't it

crickets March 10 2008, 10:01:30 UTC

Wow this was excellently written. The scene of the cylons interrogating Gaeta was especially well-done! I think you have their voices down perfectly. Bravo!

I really really enjoyed this line for some reason:

Closing his eyes, he let himself drift off listening to the cries of a baby without her mother.

Nice little detail there. Really put me in that place. Great work!

i_want_2 March 10 2008, 12:50:49 UTC

Why thank you! I tried, and I hope it paid off.

I guess I did my job, then. Thank you.